some people say people taking risks can be more successful than people who are careful and cautious. what is your opinion?
Living in a harsh society, it divides people into two types, one who takes risks, one who always bear in mind. I can’t really tell which of them tend to be more successful because both of them have their own merits. However, as I am a risk-taking person, I always find the former much more positive than the latter.
It may seem like taking a risk puts you in a troublesome situation but as this act accumulates, you can have more experience and vast amounts of knowledge. Of course initially, you will struggle and may face the problems that you have never faced before. You can make mistakes and mess up things, but there once said “failure teaches success”.
Through failure, you may learn how to lift yourself up when you are in a slump and maintain your work. Moreover, you will be able to man up and act with confidence in an unfamiliar environment.
Furthermore, exposing yourself can gain more opportunities that you have never gotten.
Many people do not get various opportunities in their lifetime. Few opportunities come once in a lifetime and if you slipped it, you have no chance to get it back. So people are meticulous when it comes to choosing ones. Therefore, having as many opportunities as possible is an upper hand in succeeding. However, risk-taking people are exposed to more opportunities than those who are always cautious.
Taking a risk may bring some troublesome situations, but I believe it has more advantages and profits. By having immense knowledge and opportunities, we can make our decision much more freely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 265.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89056603774 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87649167271 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596226415094 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.8055543966 48.9658058833 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277110918565 0.236089414692 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959708661469 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911552678976 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133615911781 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815758057824 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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