Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?
When talking about the beggers on the street, some people will give out a dispiteful look and unabashly criticize the beggers' laziness as if they are equal subjects like anyone else who can choose to work to earn their lives, but they prefer not to. If we draw such a simple conclusion like this and insist to show little sympathy to the beggers on the street, we might refuse to give them coins when encountering them any more. It might lead to some serious misunderstanding and, to be honest, it is unfair to them. I think, when possible, it is better to spare some pocket money to the beggers to show some mercy.
Beggers are left over on the street for some reasons. We have to admit, if the life condition is avaible, no one wants to end up in such a way. In fact, some beggers lead terrible lives majorly due to the fact that they are deprived of the ability to work as normal workforce--some beggers are disabled. I am not sure if you have noticed, some beggers kneeling down on the street are suffering from physical incompetence. Some cannot see. Some have lost their limbs. Even though it might be possible that some of them have the willingness to find a job to earn a decent life, their realistic conditions have limited such possibilities. If we stop donating money to these people, I am afraid, they will be living in worse conditions, lying under the bridge to suffer from the cold wind at night, feeling helpless seeing their children starving all day and having no idea if they can see the sun of tomorrow.
It is certain that if the beggers are in sound physcial conditions, they should go and find jobs so that they can earn their lives with dignity. But there is the fact that some beggers are acutally old people, who belong to the inferior groups in the job market. When you see an old woman, aged 80, wandering slowly on the street and picking cardboard to sustain her life, will you be feeling it is fair to request her to send out CVs and to attend interviews to look for jobs? Do you think it is possible for her to find any possible employers to have the courage and willingness to hire her as an employee? Some beggers are too old to find a job. If we stop giving them money, they will lose the last source of income, and their lives will become even worse.
Even for the beggers who are in sound physical conditions and who have not entered into their final stages of life, we should not rush to accuse them of their laziness. As a matter of fact, some beggers are suffering from psychological diseases and it is really hard for them to pick up the courage to step back to society again. When one man becomes so desperate to be left over on the street, when one man has lost his dignity to kowtow for your mercy, and when one man bears no hope for the rest of his life, do you still think this man can be positive to face the challenges of the competition from the job market? The answer is NO. Some beggers are suffering sereve depression, anxiety and other psychological diseases. It is not that they don't want to, but that they simply cannot find a job to live a normal life.
In conclusion, when talking about the beggers on the street, we should consider their indiviual circumstances and conditions before drawing to the accusation. It is better for us to show at least some respect and sympathy to offer them some economical help so that their life can be less difficult.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still, at least, i think, in conclusion, in fact, talking about, as a matter of fact, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 86.0 52.1666666667 165% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2792.0 1977.66487455 141% => OK
No of words: 628.0 407.700716846 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44585987261 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00598923014 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41644416483 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43152866242 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 869.4 618.680645161 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.437397595 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.85842293907 363% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153984574944 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051354298786 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425370147821 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992876971341 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242396085069 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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