Some people think that governments should spend as much money as possible on developing or buying computer technology. Other people disagree and think that this money should be spent on more basic needs. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, we are confronted with rising of technology.Investment in this area contributed to magnificent advances.Although some critics argue that basic need should be given the highest priority, proponents claim that advantageous of invest in technology have significant positive impacts on basic need.I cannot agree with them more.Let us explore two primary reasons.
In the first place, it benefits our planet as well as our health.
In order to drive the world economy, we rely on fossil fuel which emits a number of pollutants such as carbon dioxide, a heat-trapping gas, into the atmosphere.It goes without saying that trees absorb carbon dioxide and turn it into oxygen.More computer technology means less paper consumption. collaborative systems such as Dropbox provide a chance to share your files needless to be printed.Since we rely on trees to produce paper tech allow us to reduces our negative impacts on forests.
Moreover, it will save us a lot of direct and indirect costs.
In the wake of technological revolutions, new opportunities have emerged.The most beneficial one: remote jobs; As a result, employees don't need to commute on daily basis.This will eliminate not only transportation expenses but also Traffic costs.Traffic jams cost U.S. drivers an average of $1,200 a year in wasted fuel and time.
These perks are missed by opponents.
Before I put my pen down, it's worth to remind every and each one of us about one simple fact but often has been overlooked.This planet belongs to our future children as well. like any other human invention computer technologies may have some drawbacks.It's up to us to make the most out of it.By investing into research and development divisions we can shift toward eco-friendly products. Don't neglect your children.watch the Earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, well, such as, as a result, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 286.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3006993007 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23542031934 2.67179642975 121% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699300699301 0.524837075471 133% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.614794988 48.9658058833 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.6 100.406767564 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6 20.6045352989 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.45110844103 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107661187339 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033277418036 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042876045982 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0412637798684 0.150856017488 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484983293593 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 11.7677419355 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 10.9000537634 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.01818996416 124% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 10.002688172 200% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.247311828 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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