Some people think that Success is most important in their life. Others think that it’s more important to be happy when they fail. Which idea do you agree with and why?
By and large, It is established beyond doubt that success and happiness are anyone’s primary lifetime goal. People have always been thinking to find a way for acquiring success. One of the issues regarding this topic is whether success is more important than be happy when they fail. I, despite the general consensus, contend that be happy even when you fail is essential to have incredible life. In what follows, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that happiness is a must for one’s healthy life. Due to the complexity of life and its many aspects, there are a wide variety situation that anybody efferot can not contribute to success. One should be able to manage himself and look at this situations as a gold experience. The modern world offers numerous examples of successful people who all have claimed that failed for many times but sustain happy was their key to success. Take for example Grahame who was an incredible inventor, never became upset or disappointed when he failed, he just only tried, his success was mainly indebted to his positive mind.
Another equally significant point is that without happiness, success have no value. Some people are really successful but they don’t fell happy. Sometimes we heard that they wish do not have anything but have a good time with friends and family. Take a personal example, back to university, my supervisor who was incredible teacher, a gentle man and had a plenty of paper; was really a successful man but was not happy. When I talked to him, said that he always wants to be a musician and now none of these achievement could not made him happy because its not what they want.
Finally, it is an indisputable fact that success in modern era has not defiant definition. It’s important to be pleasure of what we doing, without thinking the result. For instance, Amin-Javadi who won Grammy’s Award for make music of Game of Thor ants movie, always was blamed by family. Although nobody supported him, he liked his work, everyday try harder and be happy of what he did. Finally, he could achieve his award. Now he is both happy and successful.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, one soon realizes that either success or happy are essential to have a better life. But people should have learned to be happy even when they failed, because life is shorter to one’s be upset. Consequently, it is highly suggested that authorities put more emphasis on peoples’ training in order to achieve a better lifestyle which in turn results in a promising future for the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 305, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
...be happy when they fail. I, despite the general consensus, contend that be happy even when you fa...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'situations'?
Suggestion: situations
... many aspects, there are a wide variety situation that anybody efferot can not contribute...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d be able to manage himself and look at this situations as a gold experience. The mo...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this achievement' or 'these achievements'?
Suggestion: this achievement; these achievements
... wants to be a musician and now none of these achievement could not made him happy because its no...
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Line 5, column 535, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...now none of these achievement could not made him happy because its not what they wan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, if, look, really, regarding, so, for example, for instance, in brief, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2197.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93707865169 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7345683217 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548314606742 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2688978118 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5416666667 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5416666667 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323882559433 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918328924206 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759250321675 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189728887937 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750150192403 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.