Personally, I strongly believe that people acquire life's most important lessons while attending the schools. There are many sources to gain knowledge but there is none like school where the fundamental basic lessons are taught, negative experiences are shared and people are connected.
To begin with, we spend almost half of our lifetime in school, which means that we also get to experience negative aspects of life in there. after all these years of switching many schools, I came to conclude that school is a place full of hatred,jealousy and fierce competition among students who strive to be the 'best'. What's more, there is always a problem that being bullied and falsely accused. Once, my precious sister was feeling stressed over the fact that other girls were telling untrue lies behind her back. In the end, She understood how to deal with this situation and became stronger as a result. Therefore, such situations influence students to gain confidence, feel independent and stronger in more real and practical life.
In addition to that, lessons taught in school are both essential and necessary for our future and career life in general. we learn various topics in classes such as biology, chemistry and physics. More specifically, we acquire the knowledge of our past history, the basic understanding of human body and the ability to solve simple mathematical problem. Surprisingly, as a native girl who once taught that these classes were unnecessary and simply boring, I was surprised that to realize that these so 'unnecessary' lessons were, in fact, extremely useful and practical. after all these years of sweating and swearing over my physical educational classes, I was able to escape from vicarious thieves who were on the verge of stealing my precious belongings.
Lastly, people find their best friends in school who teaches them lessons and aids them in a positive way. It is without a doubt that friends are most important knowledge of source of knowledge and lessons. Take my friend whom I met during my high school for an example. As a cynical teenager who was addicted to smoking, I persuaded my friend to give up on it and live healthy in order to live the life fullest. Seeking temporary happiness for the exchange of permanent healthy life was not the best option she deserved and I told her blatantly. Now, she is a healthy person who cringes at the taught of smoking. There were countess moments where we helped and taught lessons to each other in life's harshest moments.
By taking account of all these factors, I think that we are most inclined to understand and learn the most vital lessons by attending schools. People can experience both practical and theoretical knowledge as well as find once in a lifetime friend who would further guide them to become successful person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...that being bullied and falsely accused. Once, my precious sister was feeling stresse...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... who teaches them lessons and aids them in a positive way. It is without a doubt that friends are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, after all, i think, in addition, in fact, in general, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2343.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98510638298 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65238603004 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53829787234 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 725.4 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1946966199 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3636363636 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220691509618 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649578503064 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683169101234 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135551247351 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410381380392 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.