Most of the employees will not accept the 80% of their normal salary. Now a days company's expectations are very high. They need more work with less staff. Most of the companies are requesting employees to work on weekends also because they have finish up their project earliest. If they recruit more staff they have to spend money and main important thing time for their training.
If, Less staff are there in company they will work in efficient manner, they won't transfer their work to others. Two days of weekend are sufficient to spend their families. Every wants to give bright future to their children with 80% of salary they may able to give them.
In one kind of the author said its true that by giving 80% salary we can give more employment to people. Because of this unemployment will be reduce. It is beneficial for country. They can most of the time to take of their family and friends.They will get more relaxation and they can complete their task easily with in the time.
But company has to spend much money for their insurance and other benefits. More space required and more people required in HR & administration department to handle all the employees records. One more thing manager can not handle many people at a time for a single project. Most of the people will not get their promotions at right time. Competition become heavy for the promotions.
By giving the 80% salary and recruiting more people there is no profit to company. It has to spend same money as which spends previously.
- It is more important to work at a job that you enjoy, even if the salary is low, than it is to have a high-paying job that you do not enjoy. 76
- TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people 68
- TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. First of all, a group of people 66
- Some people think that we learn our most important lessons in school. Others think that the knowledge we acquire outside is the most important. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 70
- TPO-01 - Integrated Writing Task In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay inorder to do so. A mandatory policy requiri 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... accept the 80% of their normal salary. Now a days companys expectations are very high. Th...
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Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...ept the 80% of their normal salary. Now a days companys expectations are very high. Th...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... we can give more employment to people. Because of this unemployment will be reduce. It...
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Line 3, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ime to take of their family and friends.They will get more relaxation and they can c...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 12.0772626932 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 265.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70188679245 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43114228785 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524528301887 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3716301362 49.2860985944 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5789473684 110.228320801 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.9473684211 21.698381199 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06452816374 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30842218022 0.272083759551 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103677828636 0.0996497079465 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468863049326 0.0662205650399 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175582010306 0.162205337803 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723581347259 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.3589403974 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 53.8541721854 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.0289183223 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.2367328918 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 63.6247240618 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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