Advertisements and commercials are now, an integrated part of our life. when ever we are watching TV, the advertisements will come in between show, and when we are reading News papers and going outside there we can see the advertisements. Since advertisements are so popular in our daily life. They have a great impact on the society and peoples behavior. Advertisements means marketing their product or service. The positive information about the advertisement is people will get the knowledge that how to use of the product. I personally believe that its true concern that advertisements have negative impact on people's behavior.
Advertisements have bad impact on the society. As we all know that advertising is most commonly used by the companies to increase their sales. As a result, companies will try their best to attract people even sometimes neglect bad impacts. Thus, They will encourage a false statement which may not necessary to public. For example, my sister having minimum pimples on her face by watching the advertisement a cream which creates pimple free face. It's very costly cream even though to look more attractive she started using the cream. Ultimately there are zero results, it doesn't works on her face.
Secondly, advertising encourage people to try brand new things. so, people throw away the used ones then the junk material will increase in society. While our planet is suffering the insufficiency of resources, consumer societies will add to the burden.
Finally, advertisers use models with designer wear and they look beautiful with artificial things. So, because of this my younger sister always try to look like them. For that she used to ask my parents to bring those costliest material and accessories.
On the basis above discussion, I concur that there is a negative impact on people's behavior because of this advertisements.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...re now, an integrated part of our life. when ever we are watching TV, the advertisem...
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...de there we can see the advertisements. Since advertisements are so popular in our da...
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...sements have bad impact on the society. As we all know that advertising is most co...
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... look beautiful with artificial things. So, because of this my younger sister always try to...
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...e impact on peoples behavior because of this advertisements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, even so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19141914191 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95712517666 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577557755776 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4741200075 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.9047619048 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4285714286 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139838851701 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465257251863 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409667177494 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830245493734 0.150856017488 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343529816188 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.1575268817 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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