Some univerisities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject.
Currently, living in the society full of fierce competition, some universities propose that students are supposed to enroll in more diversified classes to enhance their prospects of finding employment. While other universities reckon that specializing in mere one subject is their top priority. Personally speaking, I think students ought to focus on one subject instead of wasting time on various subjects without consolidated comprehension of these subjects and there are a couple of reasons to account for my view.
To start with, nowadays, due to the ever-changing advancement of technology and the sizzling economy, the labor market has a greater need for specialists with the mastering of profound theoretical knowledge and pragmatic experience related with the specific domain. To be more specific, the student who possesses knowledge in different subjects tend to be recognized that they are not able to focus on the projects conducted in the enterprise, thus, compared with students specializing in one subjects, what they contribute to the development of this company is considered much less, which consequently leads to the adversary of unemployment. The research conducted to evaluate the employment rate in a specific region indicates that graduates, with the background concentrating on the targeted domain, are likely to receive 5-8 offers as soon as they send out their resumes, some individuals even attain several offers from fortune 500. Conversely, those students who seem to take an active part in enrolling in different classes perform poorly at the entrance of the labor market. This research illuminates that companies possess the preference on students specializing in one subject since they reckon those students are potential enough to enhance the companies development in their related domains since they have accurate career plans and solid knowledge foundation.
What’s more, since the society is full of competition, all students living on campus also suffer from great pressure, either from peer pressure or from their concerns about future development. With regard to the peer pressure or other stress coming from their concerns, a bunch of individuals, pushed by these stresses, possess tight schedules. In addition to the daily classes required by universities, they also choose some other activities to expand their outlook or enrich their resumes, like doing internships to amass practical experience, attending academic conferences to have a deep insight into the advanced knowledge, making preparation for some competitions to bring what they have learned into practice, even reviewing for some quality examinations to be entitled to enter specific fields . Hence, in order to cope with the pressure imposed by the society, the universities students are already occupied with a variety of activities, which makes them cannot vacate any spare time to enroll in more classes. Provided that universities insist on asking them to choose more classes, they may not only break down under the great pressure from the mounting school assignments but also suffer from physical illness.
Admittedly, requiring students to take more classes enables students to enlarge their scopes of knowledge, besides, it is likely to be conducive to facilitate their individual aptitude, nevertheless, the pressure it exerts on students should not be ignored. Taking the efficiency of attaining rewards into consideration, it is not a time well-spent.
In a nutshell, universities should not announce any policy to ask them to take more classes, since it exerts detrimental effects on their opportunities of hunting decent jobs and imposes a burden on students both physically and mentally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... their prospects of finding employment. While other universities reckon that speciali...
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Line 2, column 1256, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...nts are potential enough to enhance the companies development in their related domains si...
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Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... to be entitled to enter specific fields . Hence, in order to cope with the pressu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, conversely, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, i think, in addition, to start with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 104.0 52.1666666667 199% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3146.0 1977.66487455 159% => OK
No of words: 568.0 407.700716846 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53873239437 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88187981987 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00442644236 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 300.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528169014085 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 990.9 618.680645161 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.8296280492 48.9658058833 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 196.625 100.406767564 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.5 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.45110844103 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310483926952 0.236089414692 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102359772724 0.076458572812 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708561329113 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184218093491 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680163271313 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.4 11.7677419355 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 58.1214874552 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.1575268817 178% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.01818996416 128% => OK
difficult_words: 175.0 86.8835125448 201% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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