As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:
(1)students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study.
(2)students must volunteer to work in the city where the university is located or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town.
which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university. Why?
universities usually require their students to do certain activities during the semester break. some people choose to attend courses. These students believe that taking classes will be beneficial for them since it would broaden their knowledge. However, from my point of view, working as a volunteer will be more advantageous. There are several reasons why volunteering is a better option.
First, the community will get a lot of benefit from the development that the student did. The improvements that have been done will improve the citizen lifestyle, hence increasing their happiness. moreover, the students will get a good reputation in the city would land a respectable job when they graduate. For example, when she was in university, my mother helped her local market to established a new managing system as her volunteering assignment. As a result, the market become more comfortable as my mother helped put things in order.
Furthermore, volunteering gives a new activity that the student could do other than studying. As it is called a semester break, students should free themselves from campus life. Therefore, doing some work at the community will give them a new experience that they haven't done before. If they continue to study during the break, students will most likely develop burnout syndrome. I personally experienced a burnout because of too much studying, and it's hard to get rid of them.
Lastly, working as a volunteer will help student to boost ther cvs. As times goes by, competition in the job market is going to be very tight. students have to have something unique to be chosen from other applicants. Haivng a volunteering experience will definitely help them to pass cv screening.For example, my uncle got a callback from all the jobs that he applied to as he have several working experiences.
In conclusion, students should fill their holiday by doing volunteers work. This work will not only benefits the student but the community as well. moreover, student's should do other activities so that they won't experience a burnout.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16964285714 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86526468397 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1958141152 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9545454545 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213062805677 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729063608584 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881577734149 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134413363672 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586545190795 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.11 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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