Teachers are paramount part in students life. They have influential impact on education process. The question is, whether, teachers should share social or political concepts with their student or not. This can be weighed in different aspects. In my perspective, I concur with previous notion. professors should not make their private or political point of view with their student for a couple reasons.
To begin with, youngsters highly impact by their teachers. This is because, students admire on their teachers. they obey their advice and respect them. As a result, young kids try to imitate their professor in many situation. Moreover, when teacher talk with his students about politics issue and shares his opinion, kids will follow him. Furthermore, student especially teenager do not have any political experience because, they do not attend college yet. Student who eighteen years old will choose the same candidate who does their teacher prefer despite of he has a good affect on society or not. For example, when my young sister was seniers in high school, her history teacher expresses his idea about election in that time. My sister admire on her teacher, therefore, she voted same candidate that he prefers. After a while, She aware that she did wrong decision. From this experience, we can figure out the negative impact of sharing any political issue by teachers with their students.
Second reason springs to my mind is talking about any social life in classroom will have a bad affect on learning process. Teachers who communicate their private life with their students will waste class time, specially, when there is apposite opinion between student and his professor. In this case, they will spend long time by discussion and arguing. Other students in class will be frustrated and distracted. They want wisely spend their time in learning and understanding lessons.
In conclusion, The statement is as persuasive as it stands. Based on expositions mentioned above. sharing private life and political issus with students have negative impact on their decision. Furthermore, it will waste class time that should be spend in education process.
Teachers are paramount part in students life. They have influential impact on education process. The question is, whether, teachers should share social or political concepts with their student or not. This can be weighed in different aspects. In my perspective, I concur with previous notion. professors should not make their private or political point of view with their student for a couple reasons.
To begin with, youngsters highly impact by their teachers. This is because, students admire on their teachers. they obey their advice and respect them. As a result, young kids try to imitate their professor in many situation. Moreover, when teacher talk with his students about politics issue and shares his opinion, kids will follow him. Furthermore, student especially teenager do not have any political experience because, they do not attend college yet. Student who eighteen years old will elic the same candidate who does their teacher prefer despite of he has a good affect on society or not. For example, when my young sister was senier in high school, her history teacher expresses his idea about election in that time. My sister admire on her teacher, therefore, she voted same candidate that he prefers. After a while, She aware that she did wrong decision. From this experience, we can figure out the negative impact of sharing any political issue by teachers with their students.
Second reason springs to my mind is talking about any social life in classroom will have a bad affect on learning process. Teachers who communicate their private life with their students will waste class time, specially, when there is apposite opinion between student and his professor. In this case, they will spend long time by discussion and arguing. Other students in class will be frustrated and distracted. They want wisely spend their time in learning and understanding lessons.
In conclusion, The statement is as persuasive as it stands. Based on expositions mentioned above. sharing private life and political issus with students have negative impact on their decision. Furthermore, it will waste class time that should be spend in education process.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, talking about, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22478386167 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57960327956 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8904668148 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7307692308 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3461538462 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.536429449338 0.236089414692 227% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148434542262 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119810660183 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375177384357 0.150856017488 249% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.193449790244 0.0645574589148 300% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 10.002688172 40% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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