The reading passage and lecture about farming of wild tuna, the readind passage claims, there are several problems faced tuna farming. Th lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He has contraversal ideas.
To begin with, the author states, femal tuna do not lay aggs, therfore the farmers need to capture a large number of young tuna to stock their farm, and after become large and buy them, the farmers need to capture more. This point challenged by proffesor, he says, scientist discover hormone that ingect in tuna to stimulate the femal to lay a lot of eggs, as a result, farmers no need for futhert capturing of tuna fish.
In addition, the writer argues, tuna need high protien food to grow up, these food obtain from small fishs, furtheremore, their higly cost, so there is no huge profet from buying the tuna. The professor rebutts this argument, he says, it is true that tuna depend on high protien food forv their nutrition, but not only small fishes have a high protien, there are a lot of type of plants that also have high protien, since the tuna can feed them and grow up with low cost.
Finally, the writer states, tuna confined to ocean cages are likely to become infested with parasites like in southren Australia that have problem with infestation of blood flukes parasites. In the other hand, the lecturer mentions that , infestation of parasites decrease in the deep part of water, and due to the fact that tuna ocean cage put in deep part in farm , in that way the cycle of parasites is discontinue, leading to death of them, in this case no more parasites can weak tuna, therfore can grow saftly.
The reading passage and lecture about farming of wild tuna, the readind passage claims, there are several problems faced tuna farming. Th lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. He has contraversal ideas.
To begin with, the author states, femal tuna do not lay aggs, therfore the farmers need to capture a large number of young tuna to stock their farm, and after become large and buy them, the farmers need to capture more. This point challenged by proffesor, he says, scientist discover hormone that ingect in tuna to stimulate the femal to lay a lot of eggs, as a result, farmers no need for futhert capturing of tuna fish.
In addition, the writer argues, tuna need high protien food to grow up, these food obtain from small fishs, furtheremore, their higly cost, so there is no huge profet from buying the tuna. The professor rebutts this argument, he says, it is true that tuna depend on high protien food forv their nutrition, but not only small fishes have a high protien, there are a lot of type of plants that also have high protien, since the tuna can feed them and grow up with low cost.
Finally, the writer states, tuna confined to ocean cages are likely to become infested with parasites like in southren Australia that have problem with infestation of blood flukes parasites. In the other hand, the lecturer mentions that , infestation of parasites decrease in the deep part of water, and due to the fact that tuna ocean cage put in deep part in farm , in that way the cycle of parasites is discontinue, leading to death of them, in this case no more parasites can weak tuna, therfore can grow saftly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, so, in addition, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 30.3222958057 155% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1373.03311258 98% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66898954704 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29514817126 2.5805825403 89% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 145.348785872 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564459930314 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 21.2450331126 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.31762134 49.2860985944 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.888888889 110.228320801 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8888888889 21.698381199 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 4.19205298013 334% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413945142321 0.272083759551 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191784778246 0.0996497079465 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14836852552 0.0662205650399 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293180232362 0.162205337803 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.238878744565 0.0443174109184 539% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.3589403974 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.2367328918 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.498013245 137% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.