Teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.
Nowadays, the quality of education has become the top concern of modern citizens. However, people hold different opinions toward the issue that whether teachers should be paid at least as much doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid. As far as I am concerned, teachers should be paid equally or more than other elite people are paid.
To begin with, paying more for teachers can contribute to the development of education. To be more specific, high salary will motivate teachers’ enthusiasm and attract more talents. According to a recent research conducted by the State Education Bureau, more than 60% of teachers changed their career after teaching for 10 years because of the low salary. They are going to manage their own business, do the marketing job of some companies or even go abroad to learn more skills. The more specific data shows that teachers’ average annual salary reaches 15,000 dollars, which is only half of lawyers’. Undoubtedly, everyone pursues the high quality of life, which means more money we earn, happier our life will be. Therefore, it is significant to promote the salary level of teachers. By doing this, more talents will devote themselves to teaching career, and thus, enhancing the development of education.
Additionally, teachers can cultivate more excellent talents with high salary. With the fierce competition of modern society, it seems urgent that teachers should learn more to face the difficulty of teaching. That is to say, teachers have to pay more than before to improve their abilities. Take my aunt Jenny as an example, she is an English teacher of high school, who is 35 years old. However, she still keeps on learning the translation, the complicated grammar and writing skills by studying in Peking university as a master with a major in English literature. She feels stressed out as more and more students have auxiliary classes, which makes her teaching harder. As a result, she has to learn more to keep pace with students and teach better, and all of these will cost a lot of money. A normal teacher can not afford it totally. Only when the salary rises can teachers afford to take part in the advanced courses, which will certainly help students learn more knowledge. Therefore, I firmly support that rising the salary of teachers is beneficial for both teachers and students.
Admittedly, it sounds reliable that teachers are paid less than doctors or lawyers because they do less work and make less contributions. However, the work of teachers is tiring than before as the education of children has become the top priority of the society. More and more families put emphasis on their children, so teachers should be more professional and hardworking. In this way, teachers bear more responsibilities than doctors or lawyers. So after contemplating all the discussions above can we maintain that teachers deserves high salary.
To conclude, after this thorough analysis, I am confident to draw the conclusion that teachers should be paid at least as much as doctors, lawyers or business leaders are paid.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...her teachers should be paid at least as much doctors, lawyers or business leaders ar...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun contributions is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...yers because they do less work and make less contributions. However, the work of tea...
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Line 4, column 449, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sponsibilities than doctors or lawyers. So after contemplating all the discussions above...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, as to, at least, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2583.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 506.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.104743083 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.7428307748 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75671865211 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.50395256917 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 786.6 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9719088984 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6666666667 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7407407407 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320433668696 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978122154861 0.076458572812 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173896486641 0.0737576698707 236% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312659967306 0.150856017488 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262194844911 0.0645574589148 406% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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