Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
Technology plays an important role in our day-to-day lives. This is because it makes our lives easier and makes us pursue our interests. Many people believe that technology has made children less creative than they were in the past, and I am sure some disagree with this belief. In my view, technology do make students creative. I hold this belief and will explain my thesis with two reasons in the following essay.
To begin, technology has created various pathways for children to excel. Nowadays, children are exposed to many distinctive areas so that they can choose and some new stuff in their limits. Contrastly, in past we used to have very less oppurtunities to excel and show case our talent. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. My nephew uses technology to explore his field of interest. From the age of five, he started chasing his cup of tea. He learned photography classes through youtube videos and started clicking photos in different modes and apextures and always strives better output. At, the age of ten, one of his clicks got featured in Times magazine for the best creativity in color grading quality of the picture. In contrast, when i was young i wanted to be a movie editor and director. During those there is no chance of learning at homes because we have to go to film schools which are far from availability and highly expensive, which made me give up my desire.
Furthermore, it encourages us to think why and how. In the present world, children are always curious to know unknown things. They won't stop searching for their answers until they are found. So, if we shape their curiosity in right way, we can make them excel in any field. Here the right usage of technology can hold water here. For instance, my sisters child is very naughty kid. He always dillydally here and their observes surroundings and asks questions which can't be answered simply. He is very curious and tries to find answers all the time. When Reliance industries launched Jio 4G services for free of cost in the year 2015, he made full use of it by using internet from his father's phone. He made a purifier which makes waste water to be reused.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our interests. Many people believe that technology has made children less creati...
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Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... modes and apextures and always strives better output. At, the age of ten, one of his ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 759, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ality of the picture. In contrast, when i was young i wanted to be a movie editor...
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Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'dillydallies'.
Suggestion: dillydallies
...rs child is very naughty kid. He always dillydally here and their observes surroundings an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s surroundings and asks questions which cant be answered simply. He is very curious ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for instance, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70789473684 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49852449533 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8083903479 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.56 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253735319832 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591474209915 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109915301347 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176521789156 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833052307868 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our interests. Many people believe that technology has made children less creati...
^^^
Line 2, column 592, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... modes and apextures and always strives better output. At, the age of ten, one of his ...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 759, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ality of the picture. In contrast, when i was young i wanted to be a movie editor...
^
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'dillydallies'.
Suggestion: dillydallies
...rs child is very naughty kid. He always dillydally here and their observes surroundings an...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 465, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...s surroundings and asks questions which cant be answered simply. He is very curious ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, for instance, in contrast, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70789473684 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49852449533 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8083903479 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.56 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.32 5.45110844103 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253735319832 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591474209915 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109915301347 0.0737576698707 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176521789156 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833052307868 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.