Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other. Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages. Which type of communication do you prefer and why?
Communication in human lives is of paramount importance. Once cannot afford to be casual about it. Afterall a significant amount of human life thrives on the effectiveness of communication. However, the tools and modes of communication have evolved over the years. I am strong proponent of written communication, and I would explore more through the following pragraphs and justify my inclination.
To begin, I would always supplement my verbal communication with a written text thereby summarizing the discussion. This is extremely useful if my audience or the participants have a fragile memory and its hard for them to recollect the specifics of discussion. When you send a written text to your audience, you provide them with a tool to fall back if they happen to forget the conversation, which is quite normal amongst all age groups. Last week, when I met my project team and reviewed the open action items, I noticed how oblivious and ineffective my colleagues were. Owing to a personal emergency, I had to rush out of the office and I could not summarize the minutes of our meeting in an email. The absence of written text induced the situation where we had landed as a team. Most of us couldn't recollect our tasks and even if someone did, there was a cacophony as the team couldn't collectively agree on the actions.
Next, summarizing a phone call or an interchange with a written message promotes trust and professionalism in the social lives. When you take the extra mile by drafting the minutes of your meeting, you send a purposeful message to your audience. As a result, your audience feel the motivation to work on their actions and help your fulfil the objective of your meeting. Moreover, you leave a lasting impression that can reap its own benefits going forward. I was presenting the program to my executive team last week, wherein some of them had volleyed some action items for me. Throughout the meeting I scribbled my notes and followed up the presentation with a lucidly compiled minutes of meeting. As you would have guessed, I received a series of appreciations from the group and some encouragement to take up more responsibilities moving forward.
In a nutshell, if we can communicate more frequently through text messages, we can definitely be more productive in achieving our goals in life.
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- Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages Which type of communication do you prefer and why 78
- Technology has made it easier for people to communicate with each other Some people prefer to talk over the phone while others prefer to communicate through text messages Which type of communication do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95907928389 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0603457024 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554987212276 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0210538899 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.95 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.55 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.45110844103 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13862352506 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418385013697 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410408457738 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0854191903571 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00620782681199 0.0645574589148 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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