There are several decisions that people are required to make every day, ranging from dealing with trivial things, like what to wear or eat in every morning, to significant affairs, including choosing a job or running a policy. The time spent on making different decisions varies greatly. From my perspective, when it comes to make an important decision, it is a desirable quality that people take a lot of time on it.
For students, careful considerations allow them to make a choice that they will never regret. As for students, what are the important decisions for them? It is definitely not about daily trivial things like deciding which fancy shoes or clothes to wear; It’s about making a decision about where they will go in the future. In other words, important decision involves choosing a satisfying university. To make such an important decision, they need to search for the information about the university they desire to go, including the location, the professors, curriculum and other aspects about the university. It is the whole process that requires students to spend much time on it. For example, when I was required a choose one university, knowing the importance of this decision for me, I just embarked on an extensive research, sorting out a list of universities, checking whether they can provide students with dorms, finding out whether they are located in the big cities or not, etc. Researching all these things actually took me nearly half a month. Eventually, thanks to my extensive research, I finally chose one university which was located near a big city and provided an opportunity for students to live on campus.
For businessman, meticulous consideration enables them to succeed in their career. As for them, the most important thing is to have a successful career. In order to achieve this, they have to identify the potential risk of their commercial behaviors and avoid making mistakes in their strategies. All these things can not be done within a short period of time in case they would suffer from the loss of potential income and investment. For example, traders have to investigate which country can be their reliable trading partners; those who sell electrical devices have to research who their potential consumers are and what can most attract them; people who work on finance have to search for the information about nearly every stock’s company. Had it not been for those long time spent work, success would never be ensured.
Admittedly, a voice arises that people who make a swift decision are able to pursue their goals early so that they are more likely to be successful. Ironically, making a immediate decision just increases the likelihood of working on the wrong path especially in those important situations.
In a nutshell, taking a lot of time to make a decision is a good quality for people in different stages.
There are several decisions that people are required to make every day, ranging from dealing with trivial things, like what to wear or eat in every morning, to significant affairs, including choosing a job or running a policy. The time spent on making different decisions varies greatly. From my perspective, when it comes to make an important decision, it is a desirable quality that people take a lot of time on it.
For students, careful considerations allow them to make a choice that they will never regret. As for students, what are the important decisions for them? It is definitely not about daily trivial things like deciding which fancy shoes or clothes to wear; It’s about making a decision about where they will go in the future. In other words, important decision involves choosing a satisfying university. To make such an important decision, they need to search for the information about the university they desire to go, including the location, the professors, curriculum and other aspects about the university. It is the whole process that requires students to spend much time on it. For example, when I was required a choose one university, knowing the importance of this decision for me, I just embarked on an extensive research, sorting out a list of universities, checking whether they can provide students with dorms, finding out whether they are located in the big cities or not, etc. Researching all these things actually took me nearly half a month. Eventually, thanks to my extensive research, I finally chose one university which was located near a big city and provided an opportunity for students to live on campus.
For businessman, meticulous consideration enables them to succeed in their career. As for them, the most important thing is to have a successful career. In order to achieve this, they have to identify the potential risk of their commercial behaviors and avoid making mistakes in their strategies. All these things can not be done within a short period of time in case they would suffer from the loss of potential income and investment. For example, traders have to investigate which country can be their reliable trading partners; those who sell electrical devices have to research who their potential consumers are and what can most attract them; people who work on finance have to search for the information about nearly every stock’s company. Had it not been for those long time spent work, success would never be ensured.
Admittedly, a voice arises that people who make a swift decision are able to pursue their goals early so that they are more likely to be successful. Ironically, making a immediate decision just increases the likelihood of working on the wrong path especially in those important situations.
In a nutshell, taking a lot of time to make a decision is a good quality for people in different stages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 715, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...on it. For example, when I was required a choose one university, knowing the importance ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e things can not be done within a short period of time in case they would suffer from the loss...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ly to be successful. Ironically, making a immediate decision just increases the l...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, finally, if, so, as for, for example, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02087682672 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75965749419 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498956158664 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 763.2 618.680645161 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2696074382 48.9658058833 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.523809524 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8095238095 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95238095238 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303322139025 0.236089414692 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100086587585 0.076458572812 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140813793936 0.0737576698707 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219185994876 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198644808046 0.0645574589148 308% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.