There many people think that is wrong give money to beggars. Are you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, It is commonly seen many people sleeping and living on the streets. Additionally, most of those individuals commonly earn a living bagging for money. Even though, some people could think that gives money to them is a bad idea. In my point of view, there are two reasons to support them.
In the moment that someone contributes with money to help them to improve their's life welfare, I mean, they could survive with that amount, because if they are in asking for money is because they do not have a job or a good economical status. To illustrate, I would like to put an example of one of my father's experience, who worked as electrician when I was a child, sometimes I saw him repairing and connecting many cables around the house. Nonetheless, I had the opportunity to accompany with him to do his work, later I was astonished when I realized that my father gives the opportunity to one person, who had a long hair and was asked us for give him money, in order to support him during the installation of some cables in the house's ceiling. After the job was done, my father gives him a remuneration for his work. When I asked about my father: why the man was there?, he told me the man did not has any job and he became in bankrupt after lost his job.Therefore, My father offered him an income's opportunity.
On the other hand, it is easy to make an opinion that beggars are people that do not like to work, and as a result they are in that condition. Nevertheless, that idea could be taken as wrong, many people that are unemployed have becoming in homeless.For example, the founder of Marco's, a clothing store, owe to the bank an amount of around 50 Millions of dollars, but his company did not make any profit, he made the decision of selling his properties, left him with almost nothing. Many magazines describe him as the worst company's founder of the history. He currently is living in the city, and how he do it? He just begging.
Despite there are reasons for judge a person for his status, it's better support him with a least a few amount of money, perhaps it could help him to eat. In my opinion, everyone have to help each other no matter what. As my grandma said: "Don't judge a book by its cover."
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: At the moment
...re are two reasons to support them. In the moment that someone contributes with money to ...
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ecause they do not have a job or a good economical status. To illustrate, I would like to ...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'houses'' or 'house's'?
Suggestion: houses'; house's
... the installation of some cables in the houses ceiling. After the job was done, my fat...
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Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... was there?, he told me the man did not has any job and he became in bankrupt after...
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Suggestion: Therefore
...e became in bankrupt after lost his job.Therefore, My father offered him an incomes oppor...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'incomes'' or 'income's'?
Suggestion: incomes'; income's
...job.Therefore, My father offered him an incomes opportunity. On the other hand, it ...
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Suggestion: For
...re unemployed have becoming in homeless.For example, the founder of Marcos, a cloth...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '50 million'.
Suggestion: 50 million
...re, owe to the bank an amount of around 50 Millions of dollars, but his company did not make a...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...his status, its better support him with a least a few amount of money, perhaps it...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'few amounts'.
Suggestion: few amounts
..., its better support him with a least a few amount of money, perhaps it could help him to ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... matter what. As my grandma said: 'Dont judge a book by its cover.'
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, for example, i mean, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1828.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46943765281 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58866364222 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508557457213 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.1679300822 48.9658058833 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.529411765 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0588235294 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135487174475 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493238813531 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0585539877873 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951774686689 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664368538062 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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