Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
It goes without saying in this sophisticated and progressive world where we live, managing a country is a time consuming and demanding work. In this regard government usually make some rules, to contorl the people and prevent them from crossing the lines. This rules usually target the young genertoin mostly. While some people mention that the rules that society expects young people to obey may too restrict, many stand on the other side of the continuum believing otherwise. As far as I concern I believe that the negative effects of restricted rules outhweight its possitive influence. My reasons to substantiate my viewpoint will elaborated hereunder.
First and without a shadow of doubt, nowadays rules are so restricted that prevent young generation to increase their horizons. Reaching to new technologies and beneficial inventions need a society without any boundries. In this kind of free society young generation will come up with new ideas making new invetions which facilates human being life in many aspects. Needless to say if gorvernment prevent them by ristricted rules they can not nurish. Take my personal experience as an example. As a elemntary student, I always tried to mix some chemical components in labratorary and perform facinating experiments. However, the lab assitance made some punishining rules preventing students to to such things. As a result, I changed my school and I went to schooll with fewer rules. After a while, becuase I was free to do anything I want in lab, accidentally, I made a water proof chemical matter. Because of that invention, I got the city educational prize, rewarded each year to talented students. Needless to say, If I wasn't free in doing experiments, I wouldn't get the prize.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that, too many rules can push the young generation toward not obeying them. There is an old saying in persions culture states that, "Less is better".To put this phrase into more vivid picture, it indicates that when you have too much of every thing it usually have detrimental effects. No matter what it is , it may be money, food, it must be sufficient to be effective. In this regard, the society rules will be effective if don't restricts every options. Additionally, sinc young generation think beyond borders, they would't obey if there are too much restriction. An example about my Iran the country where I live can drive this notion home. In Iran, the govenment bans all the funs such as going to bar, smoking weed , hanving fun with opposite gender. The also make all the woman to wear scarf. By looking into the county and just walking in streets everyone can understand that these rules are not only effective, but also young people break the rules even more than a normal country with less rules.
To sum up consindering all the aforementioned reasons, one can draw the conclusion that todays society rules are too strict. these strict rules not only prevent young generation to nurish in their academin life, but also make make them to cross the line even more that a normal society with fewer rules.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, while, kind of, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2603.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 520.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00576923077 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77530192783 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73831728555 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 291.0 212.727598566 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559615384615 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 815.4 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4281455571 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9642857143 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.32142857143 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23610263567 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567127503043 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599549901397 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155237367593 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035862073149 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 86.8835125448 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.