In times of economic crisis, in which field do you think the government can
cut financial support?
1) Art
2) Scientific research
3) Parks and public gardens
Some people think that when a country faces an economic crisis, the government should cut its financial support for artists. Others disagree and argue that the government should spend less money on scientific research. Still, others claim that disbursing fewer budgets on parks and public gardens is a better option. For me, I maintain that
To begin with, the government should save money when a recession occurs, and cutting down budgets on supporting artists can help the government save a great deal of money. For instance, during the economic crisis in Taiwan in 1990, the Taipei City government stopped wasting 10 million dollars per year supporting young musicians. Similarly, the Kaohsiung City government also decided to not allocate 5% of the total budget assisting average artists in finding a job. As a result, both governments saved nearly 20% of their total budget. On the contrary, the Taichung City government decided to stop disbursing money on pruning trees in parks and public gardens. Yet, the government only saved 1 million dollars per year, because hiring people to do horticulture is overall not expensive.
In addition, the government must emphasize citizens' health, but cutting expenses on scientific research might make many residents sick. For example, the Taiwanese government stopped spending 200 million dollars on supporting biomedicine research during the pandemic. Although the Taichung City government saved millions of dollars, the research and the development of the domestic Covid-19 vaccine were delayed. Consequently, many patients do not have any vaccine to take after they were infected with Covid.
Last but not least, governments must ensure that residents are living a happy life during the economical recession. Nevertheless, disbursing less money on parks and gardens will make citizens feel unhappy. Take the Hualien County government as an example. Five years ago, the Hualien City government decided to stop aiding Mei-Zhou national park's construction. Also, the government cut down $500,000 on hiring volunteers to clean trash in gardens and parks. Therefore, citizens do not have any place to relax during the weekend, so the suicide rate increased from 0.01% to 0.1%. Two months later, the Hualien County government regretted and chose to reduce the amount of money spent on artists instead. Since most artists are accustomed to living a poor life, the decision did not affect the mental health of most artists. Three months later, the rate dropped from 0.1% back to 0.01%.
In conclusion, I believe that cutting down financial support on art is the best way for the government to overcome an economical crisis. After all, the government must save a great deal of money, focus on the public's health, and make sure that citizens can still live a joyful life during the crisis.
- Imagine that you have been given the opportunity to advise the government of a city or region area that you are familiar with to spend more money on ONE thing to benefit the city or region Which ONE of these do you believe would be the most beneficial for 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion 73
- Imagine you have one week to spend on a vacation in a city you ve never been to before Would you prefer to spend the week participating in scheduled activities such as going on guided tours of the city or would you prefer to spend the week exploring the c 73
- A professor wants his her students to learn as much as possible in a short period of time which do you think is more helpful in achieving this goal requiring students to work together as a group or to work alone 83
- It is more important to use your own knowledge and experience than ask others knowledge and experience to solve problems 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ents are living a happy life during the economical recession. Nevertheless, disbursing les...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...t way for the government to overcome an economical crisis. After all, the government must ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
...ave a great deal of money, focus on the publics health, and make sure that citizens can...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, nevertheless, similarly, so, still, therefore, after all, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2388.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 451.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29490022173 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60833598836 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63300198365 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514412416851 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 705.6 618.680645161 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 15.0 3.08781362007 486% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5822676723 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7916666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70833333333 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297806907328 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831434829873 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543589174059 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180860076314 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043868944374 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.