As known the modern life is more comfortable and easier than the past. According to the existence of facilities such as technology, transportation and electricity. Personally, though, the today’s life is easier than the life when our grandparents were children. I feel this way for the following reasons which I will explain as follow.
To begin with, In the past the health care wasn’t good enough that cause the spread of a lot of diseases such as Colira, Malaria, etc. A plenty of people has died of this disease and the leak of the necessary medical care. Nowadays, hospitals have an easy accessing and qualified with all of the required tools to deal with such a disease or their equivalents. Furthermore, people can look for the best doctor on the internet or by using any application on the phone.
First of all, In the past there was an abundance of obstacles for accessing to the information or answering any question. The internet has opened the people eyes on the information and knowledge since the access for them has become so easy. Everyone can learn anything and getting highly proficient through the electronic learning. For example, learning English writing was so hard for me in the beginning but by using the online websites, it’s getting so easy right now.
Secondly, the transportation is now available that cause travelling to a foreign country is so easy. Travelling is so important to get information’s, experience and met new peoples. In addition to, the study abroad is only based on a scholarship. Getting a scholarship could be obtained by searching the internet and making an online application.
Finally, the electricity was a powerful invention, through it all the previous facilities has been obtained.
Our grand parents in the past was getting light by firing wood or candels that was making there life so miserable since they can lose that light with a small amount of air. In the mean time, we can obtain light just by pushing on button. Moreover, the food was cooked by firing woods but now we use an electric oven.
In conclusions, as we go by the time we can get technology and more modern facilities that wouldn’t be exist in the past. Now we live in a highly developed environment than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93489583333 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94712403765 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53125 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8911107608 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1363636364 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.31818181818 5.45110844103 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132160337561 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403690090383 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670302294783 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0667246844913 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872912437629 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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