Every individual is trying their best to lead a comfortable and better life for himself and family. But the question arises here is, whether life is more easy and comfortable today or when our grandparents were kid? Different people hold different views. Some would say life z better today, other would prefer the previous time when our grandparents were kids. As far as i am concerned, i would choose the first option and i have several reasons for that.
First of all, see how much technology has been improved over time, and is still progressing. During my grandparent's childhood days, they have not even heard of internet, google, facebook etc. When someone from the family used to go outside the country for higher studies, rest of the family back at home would wait the whole day till that person calls from STD and informs them dat he has reached safely. But now everything is so fast, and up to date. For example, when my elder brother was going to USA for some research work, and it was a long flight. My mom was worried about him. But thanks to latest technologies, with the help of maps, we were able to track his flight status after every hour and that relieves my mom and rest of the family. And not just that, we were talking to him everyday through video calling. In short, i was just trying to say that new technologies and many new inventions has made our life more peaceful and comfortable which was missing in our grandparents childhood times.
In addition, in our grandparents chilhood times, people were not so broad thinking . They were very conservative mostly about womens.womens were not allowed to go to colleges, even if they wanted to do higher education. But, today womens are standing with men's in almost every field. womens are giving tough competition to men. Take an example of my grandmother. My grandfather told me once that my grandmother was very good in studies. She used to get good marks in school as well as she was good in tennis too. But she never went to college because my grandmother's parents were against her wish. They do not want to go against the society beliefs. Moreover, they did her marriage against her will and she never got chance to finish her studies. This proves that todays life is much easier and comfortable for women's as they can do whatever they want to do. They do not have to sacrifice their dreams just because of some ridiculous beliefs.
In sum, although some people thinks that life was easier when their grandparents were kids, i think todays life is better and more comfrtable for me and the rest of society. It has given us the latest technologies which is helping us in every manner and has given all womens an equal status in the society.
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-32 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe 71
- TPO-13 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, well, for example, i think, in addition, in short, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2235.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 482.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63692946058 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49154789491 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522821576763 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3041169233 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8214285714 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198657851128 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0511260931656 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507497413659 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134800831067 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276852683234 0.0645574589148 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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