Having family is a blessing. Family is always on your side whatever the situation is. But the question here is, is it good thing to have a extended family including grandparents, uncles, aunts, and cousins? Different people hold different views. Some would say having big family is always good, while other prefer to live with the small family including parents and siblings. As far as i am concerned, i choose to live with big family and i have the following reasons.
To start with, big family is always more fun and extra love and care. You can plan for some long trip altogether which will be more entertaining, rather than going alone with parents and siblings. In the family, you always have cousins of your age with whom u can share all your secrets and can . I live with my extended family which includes my grandparents, one uncle, aunt, and their kids other than my parents and two sisters. Let us take our example. Last year, we all went to Europe for summer vacation. Although, it was a long flight, but we enjoyed even in that tiring flight. we all cousins were sitting in the same row. we spent our whole flight in playing games and singing songs. Our grandfather was telling his own stories, how he met our grandmother and all, which was very interesting though.The whole europe trip was awesome . Not just that, whenever i need some help related my studies, or any school related activities, i always reach to my cousin. He always gives my best advice and motivate me.
Furthermore, family always go beyond their limits to help you, when you are in real need. I still remember the time, when i was in high school. One day, when i came home, we all were sitting and having lunch. My dad was out of the town for some office work, and my uncle was in his office. After finishing lunch, everybody went busy with their daily routine. Suddenly, we heard my younger sister screaming and crying. We all rush to see her. What we saw that she fell off from bed and she had fracture on her right arm. She was not able to move her arm. My mom was panicking so much, and she even did not knew what to do. At that time, my aunt drive us to the hospital. we did not even took our cards to pay the bills. My uncle paid all the bills for all the hospital expenditures. So, what i am trying to say that having uncles, aunts, etc in the family helps you in your bad situations of life. They will be there for you whenever needed.
In sum, even though some people do not like to live with big family for their own reasons, i always prefer big joint family.
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-13 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-32 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe 71
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, still, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 473.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40380549683 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66353547975 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26856148057 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 251.0 212.727598566 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530655391121 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7241228238 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.2647058824 100.406767564 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9117647059 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55882352941 5.45110844103 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 17.0 4.88709677419 348% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160304429261 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416378550252 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352564828035 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102557881901 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251363191775 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 11.7677419355 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 58.1214874552 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.1575268817 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 10.247311828 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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