Everyone is working hard to fulfill all their dreams. Some are working to become rich, while others want to be famous, and some do hard work for inner satisfaction. But the question here is that " whether workers are satisfied when they do different types of task all day long or when they keep on doing same task the whole day"? As far as i am concerned, i would really enjoy doing multiple task all day long' instead of getting stuck to one same type of job, and i have given following reasons in support of my view.
Firstly, i believe that doing one kind of work every time will not let you grow in your field. You will not be able to explore your interests and what kind of weaknesses you have. I will give you an example from my experience. My husband is an mechanical engineer. Initially, he was working as an manager and he was enjoying it. After sometime he realized that just managing things is not going to help him succeed in his field. He really wanted to do something more. He talked about this to his boss. He started going with his boss to the plant where companies big machines run.. Now he is working as manufacturing engineer as well as manager. This shows that doing same thing all the time will stop you getting more in life what you deserve.
Furthermore, i think it is pretty boring doing same stuff all the time. I am an dental assistant by profession. in the start, i was happy about doing cleaning teeth, assisting the dentist etc. I was not allowed to take radio graphs, to do sealants and ultrasonic cleaning which i find really exciting and interesting. Finally, i did hygienist course and were able to do rest of the things.Moreover i was making good money, better than what i was getting being dental assistant.
Admittedly, there will be some people who thinks other way that doing same things repeatedly will make you perfect in that job, and u will get good experience and you are going to earn more. But due to aforementioned reasons give above, i firmly believe that doing variety of tasks help us in growing as well as it keeps us interested in that particular field
- TPO-13 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The extended family (grandparents, cousins, aunts, and uncles) is less important now than it was in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-32 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe 71
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, well, while, i think, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52083333333 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50103602665 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544270833333 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.1851118814 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263134286551 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678019840764 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105014103061 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166715833135 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129899340238 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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