TPO-20 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadys, with the progress in the communication we see a lot of successful persons in the world. There are some arguments about whether the people who are following their dreams and take risk are more successful or the people who are careful and act base on their knowledge. In my opinion the former are the successful. The reasons will be elaborated hereunder.
Firstly, if one repetetively do the same task through their career it brings about blocking their minds. In other words, doing same task without any creativity causes one act like a robot. So, they do not think about the details of the job and it breeds in lack of innovation. For example, consider a person whose job is typing some letters. If they only go to the work and start to type the letters without thinking about how they can do something to reduce the time of typing, they stay in the same position for ever and never can be a successful person.
Moreover, trying new methods and things can uncover one hidden skills. To clarify, If one try a variety of things in their life they may face with some abilities which they never pay attention to them before and they can do them greatly. As a result, they can be successful in these abilities.
Finally, lots of remarkable experiences come by any new efforts. To elaborate assume one who try to do new things in their lives, They gain a lot of experiences in different subjects although they may fail in some subjects. Consequently, now, they are expert in a variety of matters and can be successful in them.
To sum up, in my opinion, no one cannot be successful person unless they try new things in their lives and take risks. Because by facing with new problems one's can uncover their ability and gain experience. On the other hand, if one hamper theirselves with daily job, they obstucle their minds. So, taking risk is a crucial ability for a successful person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, for example, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67857142857 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54140876354 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505952380952 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7403388924 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7368421053 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217278178196 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715660029561 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419869750972 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136183596488 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127613640912 0.0645574589148 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.