TPO-32 - Independent Writing Task
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
young people have no role, or very less significant role comparing to the elders, in determining the future of the society they are living in.
We can see this situation in governing bodies, mainly parliaments. Although there are some young people in the parliaments, or in the ministries, or even as prime ministers in some countries, they are merely individuals of exception. Governmental departments consist mostly of
older people, as it it " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">takes great amount of time, experience
and wealth to get into high positions. this makes young people people " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">significantly less influential comparing to the elders.
Political parties, associations, or any other civilian organizations are very important for affecting the government, media, and the community itself. As similar to the previous article, these organizations need big contributions from their members, so that they don't contain big amounts of young people, thus rendering further their ability to shape the future of the society.
it is not only elders or external matters that decrease their influence though. Youngers tend to be more isolated of
the society they are living in, care less less " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">about its future, and to be more reluctant to
act about it. Many of them are afraid to get a stigma, or to get into a
trouble, since they are just in the beginning of their lives. Moreover, they
are trying to be independent. they
need to find a job, pay their credits, find a place to live, simply build a
life. By getting lost in these mundane activities, they cannot bare spending time nor energy to affect their society’s future.
All in all, through external means or matters matters " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">concerning themselves, young people are are " style="white-space: pre-wrap; cursor: default;">unable to have influence on the decisions regarding the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Young
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... and wealth to get into high positions. this makes young people people ' style=...
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Suggestion: don't
...utions from their members, so that they dont contain big amounts of young people, th...
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...er, they are trying to be independent. they need to find a job, pay their credits,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 308.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.9025974026 4.8611393121 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.46013620613 2.67179642975 167% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6402548904 48.9658058833 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 100.406767564 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.71428571429 5.45110844103 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.53405017921 287% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0799176029845 0.236089414692 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326640112676 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439436341731 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320936399317 0.150856017488 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452360819159 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 10.9000537634 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.247311828 166% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.