TPO 42 independent writing
Views differ greatly when it comes to the issue of whether works will be satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do than they just do similar tasks. Some people contend that if works can do similar tasks all day long, they will be proficient in such tasks, it will cost less time for they to finish the same amount of tasks than works who have many different kinds of tasks to do, therefore they would feel satisfied because they can make more money per day, while others assert that works who have different types of tasks to do would feel boring due to the fact that they can change to another task when they hate to continue the task that they are doing right now. thus, they will be relax and satisfied. Both opposite arguments appeal to be convincing and stand to reason. however, according to my experience and actual observation to life, I believe that works who have many different types of tasks to finish are more satisfied.
To begin with, works will not feel boring if they have different kinds of tasks to do, everyone will lose the interests once they have to keep doing something for a long time since they must repeat it without something new. Take my uncle Tom as an example, he used to be a highschool teacher about math, when he first become a teacher, he was full of passion and he is so proud owing to that he would help a substabtial students to success in future, which motivate he to get up early and work to the night, however, such situation changed after 10 years, he was tired of speaking the same contents a year after a year, hence, he started to learn cooking during the spare time, he was busy again and find the lose passion again.
another reason drives me to indcate is that doing different works would help people to improve their social skills and expand the friend circle since they can meet different people from many areas, thus they could have a lot of fun together with their friend. For instance, when I was a freshman, I used to review the lesson and notes or doing my homework in the library, but I just got a bad score in the final exams, because I was not interested in what I was learning, I feel boring to review what I have learned again and again, I order to change my college life, I decided to partcipitate a soccer club, after the class, I could play soccer with other club members, I can breath the freash air and just empty my head, I feel relax there and I made a lot of friends who would be a presious part of my university memory.
To put it in a nutshell, based on aforementioned analysis, I must reinforce my perspective that it is the works who have different types of tasks are more satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 99, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... works will be satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do than they just do ...
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Line 1, column 363, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ame amount of tasks than works who have many different kinds of tasks to do, therefore they wo...
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Line 1, column 687, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...the task that they are doing right now. thus, they will be relax and satisfied. Both...
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Line 1, column 796, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...l to be convincing and stand to reason. however, according to my experience and actual ...
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Line 1, column 894, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... to life, I believe that works who have many different types of tasks to finish are more satis...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of tasks to finish are more satisfied. To begin with, works will not feel borin...
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Line 2, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...become a teacher, he was full of passion and he is so proud owing to that he woul...
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Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... help a substabtial students to success in future, which motivate he to get up early and ...
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Line 2, column 655, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to cook'.
Suggestion: to cook
...fter a year, hence, he started to learn cooking during the spare time, he was busy agai...
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Line 2, column 713, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... spare time, he was busy again and find the lose passion again. another reason dr...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...again and find the lose passion again. another reason drives me to indcate is t...
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Line 3, column 7, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Another
...and find the lose passion again. another reason drives me to indcate is that doi...
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Line 3, column 547, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'changing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: changing
...I have learned again and again, I order to change my college life, I decided to partcipit...
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Line 3, column 683, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'breathe'? 'breath' is a noun.
Suggestion: breathe
...y soccer with other club members, I can breath the freash air and just empty my head, ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...presious part of my university memory. To put it in a nutshell, based on aforem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, i feel, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2183.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39235412475 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28133879956 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472837022133 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.1344086022 243% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 182.632445091 48.9658058833 373% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 218.3 100.406767564 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.7 20.6045352989 241% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.45110844103 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 11.7677419355 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 10.1575268817 197% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.07 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 25.5 10.002688172 255% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.0537634409 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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