TPO 46
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In a traditional society such as ours, the celebrities and athletes are kinds of pioneers and leaders and most of them are considered open-minded and intellectuals. So, their quotations and opinions are more important to younger open-minded people than the older traditional people. Celebrities are also the models of society and their opinions and beliefs are more likely to be followed by younger people in social media.
First of all, the ideas and open-mindedly opinions of celebrities are more attractive to young people. The celebrities sometimes become the most influential leaders who conduct the ways of thinking and modern culture in our society. For example, an actor, named Hossein Panahi, who passed away many years ago, was one of the celebrities whose quotations has widely been shared by his fans, especially after his death. The young people account for most of his fans because his beliefs were mostly about new ways of thinking moral issues to which the young people are the ones who pay attention the most.
Second, celebrities and athletes are also usually considered as models in society. Whenever a national disaster or national event affect or may occur in the future, the celebrities try to have the most impact. For example, last year an earthquake occurred in western Iran and many people lost their accommodation and became homeless ever since. After the disaster, a former soccer player in national level started a campaign to gather donations and financial help from all over the country. Since many young people are familiar with the player and also all celebrities, they were the first ones who contribute to the national campaign and a huge amount of money had been gathered for earthquake victims. Also, the celebrities also played a significant role in the last presidential elections in Iran. They participated in the winner candidate, Hassan Rouhani, and supported the candidate whose opinions were mostly matched with the young people in the country. So, the opinions of celebrities are more important for younger people.
Third, younger people have more access to social media than older people have. For example, Instagram is the most popular media in the country. Many young people are members of this media and follow the pages of celebrities and athletes. But, the older people in the society do not have access to social media and cannot be impacted by the opinions of the celebrities as much as the younger people.
For those reasons, I agree with the statement and the young people pay more attention to the opinions of celebrities and athletes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, third, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10823529412 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67476325635 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442352941176 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 695.7 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1140873011 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.55 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205090270308 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798354024613 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825143737402 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148109330687 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062843633806 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.