TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.

Since today's technology is advancing very fast and modern life is becoming very complicated, it is essencial for people, especially young people, to have the ability to plan and organize due to, time management, being successful and reducing mistakes.
Time management is probably the primarily reason that young people should have the ability to plan and organize. Planning and organizing helps the youth to manage their time more efficiently. Nowadays, technology is progressing very fast. So, it causes more changes all around the world and if someone wants to catch up with these changes, he or she should know how to manage the time.
Having plan and being organized lead the youth to success. Life works like a system and as the technology advances, this system becomes more complex, which in turn being successful becomes more difficult. However, having the ability to plan and organize help people, especially the youth, to be successful throughout the system by keeping discipline in their lives.
Reducing the rate of making mistakes is another reason which is related to having the ability to plan and organize. Nowadays, the living conditions become more complicated and younger generation may tolerate more tension in order to make an adaption with these circumstances. So as a consequence, sometimes they may make mistakes. Whereas, being organized and having plan help them to get ride of this stress and tension, which in turn the younger people lives better and makes fewer mistakes.
To sum up, as the living conditions become more complex, the need to have plan will be more noticeable for young generation, since it results in better time managing, achieving success and reducing the probability of making mistakes.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'planned'.
Suggestion: planned
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, whereas, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21428571429 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69413573284 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507142857143 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8312266716 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.307692308 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5384615385 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18918327378 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804153628941 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626305596092 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121117287167 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364427845454 0.0645574589148 56% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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