There is no gainsaying that friendships are an integral part of human beings’ lives and most of the people have striking bonds with their friends. In this respect, there are controversial arguments whether people should be able to maintain their friendships with a small number of people for a long time or make news and extensive friendships with more people. From my perspective, the people should attach more importance to have small number of friends for a long time rather than to have extensive people as friend. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate my points of view.
First exquisite point to be mentioned is that human beings might encounter to some problems during their live. There is no debate that the great majority of people have been in predicament and they just know their real friend under these difficult circumstances. For instance, when I was studying in university, I had some severe financial distress and I had no enough money to pay my cost of life. I asked most my friends to lend me money but nobody did not accept. I asked my old best friend who was my high school classmate. He immediately lent to me and I found that having a close friend is indispensable why most of the friends are just fair-weather friends.
Second point that comes to my mind is that most of the people cannot trust to others for telling their feelings. In other words, everybody has some secrets that he/she can talk about with just some close friends. There is no doubt that in these conditions, close friends are necessary. Because, in this way, people can be more relaxed. For instance, one of my friend wanted to marry with his classmate and he was anxious and he wavered to make decision. He talked to my and we deliberated about some profound issues in marriage and finally he could make decision for his future.
Last but not least, it is undeniable that new friends always provide new and fresh opportunities for us to learn new things. However, we can just acquire some shallow knowledge and information from them not profound one. For instance, I worked in stock market and some of my friend worked as an independent financial analyst. Nevertheless, just some of my close friends share their analysis with me. Therefore, just close friends provide a real opportunity sincerely.
In conclusion, contemplating all aforementioned paragraphs, people who have some old friends are able not only to cope with problems more successfully but also express their innermost feeling with them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...able to maintain their friendships with a small number of people for a long time or make news and...
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Line 3, column 479, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'old the best'.
Suggestion: old the best
...y but nobody did not accept. I asked my old best friend who was my high school classmate...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...friends are just fair-weather friends. Second point that comes to my mind is th...
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Line 7, column 469, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s provide a real opportunity sincerely. In conclusion, contemplating all aforeme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2090.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92924528302 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74487775003 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497641509434 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 632.7 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8424112566 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227197581926 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711783922643 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765642258113 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144473873021 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882594324695 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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