TPO31Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
there is no doubt that the quickly change world influence the people a lot and change their lifestyle. View differ considerably when it comes to the issue of whether people now are less happy and enjoyable with their lives than people were in the past. Some people contend that nowadays people live a happier life because they can make more money than before so they need not to worry about how to make living, they can buy what they want, while others assert that people today face more pressure than before, they seldom have time to relax themselves. Both opposite arguments appeal to be convincing and stand to reason, however, my experience and observation of life have let to believe that people today are less happy than before.
To begin with, people today do not feel happy because they are so busy with their endless work, as a result, they just do not have time to company their families and relax themselves, take my uncle tom as a example, he have a good job that everyone would like to have, however, my uncle never feel happy although he can get a high salary every month because he do not have time to care his daughter, and now there is no common topic between he and his daughter, my uncle always say he missed everything.
Another reason drives me to indicate is that although we could keep in touch with our friends on the internet, we still feel lonely, this is due to the fact that we spend less time to have a face to face communication with others, For instance, I used to communicate with my friends by using wechat owing to the fact that it is convient, but after several months, I begin to find the truth that we often do not talk to each other in the classroom, and it seemed that my friends are totally strangers to me. this really upset me because I find myself actually live in a viturlly world.
To put it in a nutshell, based on aforementioned analysis, I must reinforce my perspect that people now are less happy and less satisfied with their life that before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
there is no doubt that the quickly change wor...
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Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worry'?
Suggestion: worry
...more money than before so they need not to worry about how to make living, they can buy ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople today are less happy than before. To begin with, people today do not feel ...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... relax themselves, take my uncle tom as a example, he have a good job that everyo...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ves, take my uncle tom as a example, he have a good job that everyone would like to ...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...et a high salary every month because he do not have time to care his daughter, and...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: BETWEEN_PRP[1]
Message: Incorrect form of the pronoun 'he'. Use: 'between him'.
Suggestion: between him
...ghter, and now there is no common topic between he and his daughter, my uncle always say h...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uncle always say he missed everything. Another reason drives me to indicate is ...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elf actually live in a viturlly world. To put it in a nutshell, based on aforem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, still, while, for instance, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48626373626 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31731868455 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519230769231 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.1344086022 223% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.374902572 48.9658058833 328% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 204.125 100.406767564 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.5 20.6045352989 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 5.45110844103 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309894937207 0.236089414692 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167513033463 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097162504073 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20059249553 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961422210948 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 11.7677419355 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.65 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.0537634409 199% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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