In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
I would agree with the given statement that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in the use than there are today. The following are the some of the reason for the same.
Firstly, The increased traffic in the city areas. Many times people are not able to reach to their destination on time due to traffic. Hence, people prefer to use public transport instead of driving in their own cars. There are many option of public transport available nowadays, and government always try to improve these trasportation due to increased pollution. Hence, In future more number of people will choose public transport and this in turn may reduce the number of car in use everyday.
Secondly, The fuel prices are going high day by day. This situation makes it difficult for a comman man to afford a car. They prefer to travel in public transport because it might be the cheaper option for them.
Lastly, The maintenance, insurance for the car, parking charges etc. might restrict the use of car for most of the people. It would be better to rent a car if one wants to use it for few days in the year. So it can be assumend that more poeple will choose to rent a car instead of buying the own car. This might reduce the number of cars in the future.
It can be concluded from the above discussion that pollution, traffic, fuel and maintenance costs might affect the use of cars for an individual in future. Thus, In twenty years there will be fewer cars in the use than there are today.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-07-14 | Astha101 | 70 | view |
| 2023-07-14 | Astha101 | 66 | view |
| 2023-06-23 | YasamanEsml | 76 | view |
| 2023-04-13 | sonyeoso | 76 | view |
| 2023-04-08 | prakriti malla | 73 | view |
- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Other young adults prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinio 70
- Endotherms are animals such as modern birds and mammals that keep their body temperaturesconstant. For instance, humans are endotherms and maintain an internal temperature of 37°C, nomatter whether the environment is warm or cold. Because dinosaurs were 70
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated. 33
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 60
- People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment - doing things they like to do - rather than doing things they should do." 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... there are today. The following are the some of the reason for the same. Firstly,...
^^^^
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... there are today. The following are the some of the reason for the same. Firstly, The in...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
...f driving in their own cars. There are many option of public transport available nowadays,...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 488, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...urn may reduce the number of car in use everyday. Secondly, The fuel prices are going...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for the car, parking charges etc. might restrict the use of car for most of the ...
^^
Line 9, column 146, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ffect the use of cars for an individual in future. Thus, In twenty years there will be fe...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1977.66487455 62% => OK
No of words: 269.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53159851301 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32084020337 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 212.727598566 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490706319703 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4746374287 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7058823529 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.455120124417 0.236089414692 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161997921457 0.076458572812 212% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.245612733224 0.0737576698707 333% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309141392983 0.150856017488 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218275790714 0.0645574589148 338% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.