in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today?agree or not
Nowadays, cars numbers nearly the same number of people in some regions. the extensive demand to pass along distance to reach the work or the school imposed the people to buy cars. Some people think that in twenty years will be fewer cars in use than today, while others think that will be more to use. Personally, I think that fewer cars will be in the future.
First, the terrific and crowded cars in the streets will increase, so that people will take more time on the way. In this situation the people will sell their cars and start to use public transportation for long distances or they will return to use the motors and bicycles as in the past if the distance is short. In addition, the streets will be so tight with respect to the huge numbers of cars especially in the poor region, there is no space for more cars, so they should find solutions. my own experiences is a compelling example of this, in the last year I went to university to attend an exam,the university was taking 20 minutes usually but that day was at the weekend so the streets were crowded,I remember that I took 15 minutes on the one road,so I parked my car on the sideway,then I took a taxi to reach. This was a hard time and I was nervous.
Second, I think that oil and fuel will become more expensive than today because they are unsustainable resources, this will make the fueling cost more That people budget, also this resource creates air pollution which will increase with time; therefore, the people will search for an alternative solution like the public transportation or cycles. For example the poor countries like India and Pakistan using motor more than any region, also in China many people go to their work on cycles because they want to keep the environment clean for the next generations.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that in twenty years there will be fewer cars in use, because of the cost of the fuel, the negative effect on the environment, and the traffic crowded in the streets.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57983193277 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47002921831 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498599439776 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.6312653878 48.9658058833 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.25 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.75 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.45110844103 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383662387247 0.236089414692 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165790580098 0.076458572812 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170844148415 0.0737576698707 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.278652341914 0.150856017488 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127794297252 0.0645574589148 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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