at universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
I believe that universities should fund sports and social activities as much as they fund classes and libraries for the following reasons that we will explore together.
First, university is the golden gate of the students to real life. it prepares them on academic level to having a proper job and it should as well help them adopt a healthy life style. This will benefit students and society overall. For example, students who played sports and engaged in social activities during their college years are more prone to success and have less tendency to depression. This consequently will enforce better individuals in the society.
Moreover, having excellent facilities for different sports would allow students to explore their talent in a specific sport they didn’t even know about which will eventually leads to a better reputation of the university. For instance, as much as it is important for these students to attend classes and be prepared to graduate, the university offered them the chance to be a professional player in this specific sport. Eventually, the university gets more donors and future students’ applications.
Finally, Its important to remember that students spend four to five years of their lives studying and get prepared for their graduation. This is so stressful and stress causes diseases. That’s why it’s crucial to break their stress in a constructive way instead of destructive ways. Having at least gym at university would offer students better options than smoking pot for example to release their stress from studying. Students would get the chance to go to gym to take a break from their studies and meet new students share knowledge from them as well.
To put it in a nutshell, sports and social are as much important as classes and libraries, I believe that way because without sports and social activities, students years would be boring and lifeless.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...den gate of the students to real life. it prepares them on academic level to havi...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive way" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... why it’s crucial to break their stress in a constructive way instead of destructive ways. Having at ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14838709677 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70830226242 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2917112534 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196647931081 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658973330674 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732458774856 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14101665614 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700225083781 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 68, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...den gate of the students to real life. it prepares them on academic level to havi...
^^
Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a constructive way" with adverb for "constructive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... why it’s crucial to break their stress in a constructive way instead of destructive ways. Having at ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, if, moreover, so, well, at least, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 310.0 407.700716846 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14838709677 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70830226242 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529032258065 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2917112534 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196647931081 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658973330674 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732458774856 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14101665614 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700225083781 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.