at the universities, sports and other social activities are as important as classes and libraries
The distributing budgets in educetional agencies, like universities is one of the most important topics. universities have some facilities acompaninan their educational spaces. some scholar beilve that some extra activities, sports, social activities for instance, are as much important as universities educational perpuses and should aquired as much financial support as universities academic facilities. In my Opinion financial ceredit should be devided eqully in both extra activties and academic activties and I am agree with the statement mentioned in the quesstions. the following senteces will elaborate this opinion.
First, it is needless to say that the universities most important duties is to educate special people with special and specific knowledge and ability to take a rule in society, definitely this will required equiped classes, laboratories, libraries, etc. Regardless of these, studing is not the only aspect of life and one human needs other activities in their personal life. extra activities like sports, social activities, etc will provide students a happy life and time which can increase their efficiency in their proffesional carraer. if these facilities recevie sufficient financial support, all students could benefit these extra activities. Participating in these additional side of educational activities will increase the feel of joy and inherent happiness of students which increase the student learning power.
Scientist prove that excersising and involving in social activities release endrophine hormone which provide more happinsess and improve persons psychological conditions.
Second, it is worth noting that, the university is not just a place to educate and prepare students for industriy or a profession job, although it is a place which should develope and florish each students aspect of charatrisiations. if the universities financial affeir departement, just devote the budget to the academical perposes, one dimensional students is one of the its consequences. now a days society needs multi dispilnary persons and each students with knowledge of multi things could have significant influence on their life and society.
this just could be done by enough attention to the other aspects other than educational spaces. and should spent the financial source equally to both sports and educational parts. this kind of action can also flowrish other talents of the students, for instance may some students in biology field have some talents in manageing or sports activities which could be emerge by existing the suitable enviornment.
to sum up, as the univesities should prepare students for multy aspect of life and studying certain field is not the only aim of the universities. it is very important to draw the universities attention to the other extra activities, and also these kind of activties are necessary for students life-style and improve their efficiency,
So I advocating that sports and social activities in the universities are as important as classes and libraries and should receive the same financial support.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2624.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 465.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64301075269 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64369019777 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05406177552 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479569892473 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 840.6 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.2496294397 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.105263158 100.406767564 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4736842105 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.5376344086 451% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191933064843 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571305386076 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690740847365 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121818205832 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10902374436 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 58.1214874552 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 10.9000537634 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 86.8835125448 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.