What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?
1. Plant trees and create parks
2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers
3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads
With the development of society, people begin to realize the importance of environment. Thus, people are more focus on the environment of society. Currently, there is a hot issue people are likely to talk about, that is what is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities? Some of individual assert that the government can add access to the public transportation and decrease the automobiles on roads, because of the appearance of private automobiles, environmental pollution is aggravated. However, as far as I am concerned, maybe planting trees and create parks is a better way to maintain a nice atmosphere in our society. Because this approach is beneficial in many ways.
Another name for a tree is the lung of the earth, which means that the health of the earth and the health of people depends on the help of trees. Therefore, planting more trees is beneficial to provide a better living environment for people themselves. With the existence of trees, the earth can live smoothly, and people also reduce many natural disasters because of the existence of trees. Of course, in the city, the establishment of parks is also essential. This not only allows people living in busy cities to find a place to relax, but also provides more places to plant trees, so that the social environment will be better. It is reported that each tree can breathe in 40 grams of carbon dioxide per hour through photosynthesis and produce 60 grams of oxygen for people to use. Trees are very powerful. If there were no parks in cities, many trees would not be planted, and the living environment of people would be quite different from that of cities with more trees.
The recycling value of plastic bags is low, and people often throw them away after using them. Besides the "visual pollution" caused by the scattering of plastic bags on city streets, water bodies and both sides of highways, plastic bags also have potential hazards. Because the plastic structure is stable, it does not separate in the natural environment for a long time. This means that if plastic waste is not recycled, it will become a permanent pollutant in the environment and accumulate, causing great harm to the environment. Therefore, once supermarkets stop providing consumers with plastic bags, it means consumers have to bring their own shopping bags, which changes the widespread use of plastic bags into the widespread use of cloth bags. In this way, the amount of plastic waste recycled in the city will be greatly reduced. It is reported that cities that use plastic bags for shopping have air quality 40 percent lower than those that use paper or cloth bags. When people get used to shopping with their own bags, the environment of cities will be improved, which is good for people themselves and their future generations
It is also a good way to increase the public transport facilities. For economic reasons, people will reduce the number of times they use private cars and take public transport instead. Besides, they can enjoy many beautiful scenery along the way and have a good mood. But taking public transportation inevitably has some disadvantages. If people meet some emergency, taking public transportation will delay a lot of time, and important things will be delayed. When my friend took a TOEFL test, he found that he forgot to bring his ID card to the examination room. His father drove home to get his ID card and finally got it back more than ten minutes before the test began. If you take public transportation, it will cost you a lot of time and your exams will be delayed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 664, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ntain a nice atmosphere in our society. Because this approach is beneficial in many way...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun scenery seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much beautiful scenery', 'a good deal of beautiful scenery'.
Suggestion: much beautiful scenery; a good deal of beautiful scenery
...nsport instead. Besides, they can enjoy many beautiful scenery along the way and have a good mood. But...
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Line 7, column 535, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (ID) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cards'.
Suggestion: cards
...he found that he forgot to bring his ID card to the examination room. His father dro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3010.0 1977.66487455 152% => OK
No of words: 615.0 407.700716846 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89430894309 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97987886753 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73752960634 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.469918699187 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 936.0 618.680645161 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6287459529 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.793103448 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2068965517 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.65517241379 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.363303911965 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874853419486 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805600227307 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201939856256 0.150856017488 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687442252151 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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