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When a new technological device becomes available, some people buy it right away; others wait until many have adopted it. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people hold this opinion that the buy of the new available technological devices are good chose because this shows you as a unique person. But other people cast debts on this. As far as I am concerned, using new devices which have no more empirical experiments are not profitable. In the following I will pinpoint some outstanding reasons;
The first aspect to point out is that new technology devices are so expensive. They are unique in the market and there is no more competition in the market. So, I think it doesn't make any sense of using these new devices at a high price. Prices rose dramatically years ago which is hard and difficult for to people effort the life. For example, The cellphone market or even laptops and computers always has this situation, the competition between the 2 brands is high. Some people prefer to use a phone or laptop which has a unique graphic for gaming instead some people prefer to use which has a long battery life span. This situation causes competition between them to increase and the prices will be increased.
The second reason that proves my idea is that these devices are new and they don't have enough experiments. For example, As we all know, the Samsung phone had a certain version that the battery didn't work properly and they exploded after several times of use. They were so dangerous. So it clearly illustrates of need for more experiments to have adopted it.

To sort a long story, I extremely agree that the people use new devices many have adopted. It will be profitable for them. People should use the other person's comment on new devices and their experiments to prevent wasting their time and their money. It is good for everybody to consult whit other people for buying new devices.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, i think

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72638436482 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49428039927 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537459283388 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0334218932 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6111111111 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.45110844103 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266114981981 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835975200508 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704503673961 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172443702766 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612285594585 0.0645574589148 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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