Over the years, a myriad of studies has demonstrated that to be successful in life, a long period of hard work must be done. This has led some critics to argue that the reason for success is because of luck. From my own perspective, I firmly believe that the key to success is hard work and in this essay, I will discuss specific reasons to support my belief.
To begin with, when a person wants to become successful, a dedication to hard work must be accomplished. Take Jack Ma for example, although he was turned down by many companies because of his English proficiency, that didn't stop him from learning English by being a tourist guide in his city called Hangzhou. After years of working, he became fluent in English that made him build his own online marketplace called Alibaba. Until now, his company is one of the highest revenue in the world. As a result, a person must be intelligent by studying hard in studies in order to be successful in any business. In fact, any inventions can lead a person to be successful as long as he or she is being creative so that majority of people would buy the product.
Moreover, when people work hard, they are able to achieve the things they want. I assume that a famous footballer can shed light on this notion. Cristiano Ronaldo started football at a very young age to become one of the best football players in the world. Despite being skinny and poor, he always plays football and workout every day so that one day a club will scout him. This great endurance and commitment have led him to succeed in sports industries. As you can see, luck has nothing to do with success unless you work really hard. Therefore, the more you face challenges, always never give up on your dream.
In conclusion, everyone may hold a different view on this debate. However, I strongly believe that working hard is a crucial role to succeed in life as your own dedication leads to a better future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: REASON_IS_BECAUSE[1]
Message: Probably an incorrect phrase. Use 'the reason 'is that''.
Suggestion: is that
...cs to argue that the reason for success is because of luck. From my own perspective, I fir...
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Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ecause of his English proficiency, that didnt stop him from learning English by being...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5632183908 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51701830744 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563218390805 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6244124924 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227503226612 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071260470759 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0912308760951 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13244433347 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05095474576 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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