whether all university students need to get a good comand of history courses.
With the development of advanced technology and science, compared with the past, great changes have taken place in our society. However, whether all university students need to get a good command of history courses is debated among the school and parents. Personally speaking, I assert that it is reasonable that everyone should take history courses in spite of the major especially when taking the cultivation of love for nation and the benefit for making friends into consideration.
First of all, learning history can be effective to the cultivation of love for country. It makes the students get acquainted with the origin of their country, which leads them to know the difficulty of country development. In this way, the students can know that a lot of people made great contributions to their country, which lay a solid foundation for their happy and safe life nowadays. After that, the students will be more inclined to cherish what they have and be grateful to everyone around them. It is these history that gives the students the right direction, and makes them love their country deeply. It is commonly known that the students are the future of country, only when the students have a clear understanding about their country will the country has a bright future. This reminds that learning history is significant to the development of country.
Secondly, it is beneficial to make friends with others. There is no doubt that students often take part in a lot of activities where some people will communicate with each other during a break. As a internet survey revealed, the most topic during the communication is about history, which accounts fot 35 percent. Therefore, getting a good command of the history is very essential and plays an important part in making friends because the ignorance about the history will make us eclipsed in the talking. In other words, history knowledge is an indispensable tool which can be used to make friends.
Admittedly, taking history courses will occupy a lot of time of students. However, after considering the great benefits brought by the history courses, it is not an overstatement that taking history courses is worthy.
In conclusion, based on the reasons I stated above, I still insist that studying history courses for all students including some people major in other fields is necessary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 454, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this history' or 'these histories'?
Suggestion: this history; these histories
...rateful to everyone around them. It is these history that gives the student the right direct...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...cate with each other during a break. As a internet survey revealed, the most topi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, no doubt, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08479532164 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64957621051 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523391812865 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7705903983 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.933333333 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287094860254 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965159651792 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119507385053 0.0737576698707 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150125047393 0.150856017488 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555289855324 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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