Which of the following people do you think need the government financial support most？
1. people over 70 years old
2. young families with children
3. people who lost their jobs
Commonly, the government makes a significant investment in providing financial support to help people make a living more easily. In my opinion, I believe people over 70 years old most need the government financial support among other groups. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
For starters, people over 70 years old lack the ability to earn a salary independently due to their deteriorating body conditons. According to a research conducted by an elite institution, most old people in this country have at least one chronic illness like diabetes. Therefore, it is necessary to provide financial support to cover their living expenses and medical treatment. If the government fails to offer subsidy to old people, they may face a decreasing expected life span.
Additionally, financially supporting old people can encourage young people to perform their duty to pay taxes and enhance the sense of security of the whole society. Nowadays, many citizens complain about their heavy tax duty because they consider many governmental programs waste of money. Meantime, many people worry about what their lives will be when they grow old and have no independent income resource. Financially supprting the old can facilitate a healthy social support system. When the public clearly see old people are carefully attended to by the government and where the governmental expenses go, their complaints will be removed and they will be willing to perform their tax obligations with the trust established on the government.
Admittedly, young families with children often struggle to have enough resource to raise their children. However, we can take other measures to assist them rather than offer financial support, which might cause young people to sit in the home and passively wait for subsidies. It is favourable to help them by offering cheap day-care service and free public education so that they can have more effort to complete work tasks and relieve the pecuniary burden of taking care of children.
Also, there are other ways to support redundant people. The government can invest in construction projects to create job opportunities, which turned out to be an efficient measure in previous condition like the Great Recession. In this way, the government can not only solve the unemployment problem but also promote the construction all over the country.
Based on the reasons stated above, we can safely conclude that people over 70 need the government financial support most. Only by providing them timely financial support can we build a stable and safe society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, at least, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27446300716 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77405211626 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565632458234 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1348837649 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.95 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427909581657 0.236089414692 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130182686422 0.076458572812 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981617276046 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220642107243 0.150856017488 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810880345232 0.0645574589148 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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