Which one do you prefer living in the city or in the villege?
It is quite fascinating how people tends to living in the countryside than the city. Many people prefer living in the villege rather than the city because of the healthy environment, the strong social connections and the tranquility of the atmosphere.
First, in terms of the healthy environment, countryside is healthier than city because of the fresh food and the fresh air. It is a fact that Most of the city people are unfit because of the unhealthy fast food and vactories' polluted air, whereas country people are totally the opposite; they have fresh food and clean fresh air as well as the lovely natural green sights.
Second, due to the small population of the countryside, villege people have got a salid social connections between eachother. The rural community is characterized by collective community participation, whether in joys or sorrows. Also the people of a one villege are more friendly to eachother than the people in the city.
Third, People are always looking for tranquility and only few of them know that peace and quiet can only be found in the countryside due its tranquil atmosphere. Consequently, many people, even the famous ones, make time a year to go to the countryside and relax physically and mentally.
To conclude, it became very obvious that life in villeges and life in cities present two contrasting pictures. Therefore it is up to the person himself to decide where to live in. As for me, I like to live in a villege in a close vacinity to a modern city, so that I can enjoy the pleasures of both the city and the villege.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, look, second, so, therefore, third, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78966789668 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78199906495 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523985239852 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0780587699 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187491257194 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714816708332 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648526054383 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10470768827 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787753819275 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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