Which one do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place
In today's world, the speed of change is accelerating and it makes circumstances that need to handle more wisely. When people get unsatisfied with their life they decided to move and migrate to another country. A controversial question that is often raised regarding this issue is whether better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another city. Some people possess the conviction that the former is more agreeable, whereas others hold exactly the opposite and allege that the latter is more fruitful. I personally, content that this issue is multifaceted and needs to evaluate all the dimensions of this decision. As we all know, when we stay in negative places, it has a worse consequence on our mental health. I think it is more auspicious to move from one place to another places. To substantiate my point of view, the following paragraphs represent a cursory glance at the most outstanding reasons.
The first reason that comes to mind elucidating my standpoint is when we migrate to a new place, we can adapt to their culture and their society. It helps us to be more gregarious and improve our soft skills like connecting with new people and caring about them. Consider my personal experience to make the point more clear. My friend is so selfish and rich. She has all she wants in her life. When she was 20, her father decided to send her aboard for a living. She had some trouble at first, because she could not be connected with native people and did not speak to them very well. After several years, she could make a friend and get a good experience of living in another country.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that when someone suffered from some factors in their own country, they decided to live in another country. As prices rose dramatically recently, it is hard for people to afford their lives. Some people want to access a better health care system. I think these factors are the main features that boost and encourage them to live in another country.
In brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, I think it is better to move from one place to another to get a more desired situation in life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, regarding, second, so, well, whereas, i think, in brief
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67441860465 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56440388739 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516795865633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8092390056 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169642336618 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529406702262 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097075016478 0.0737576698707 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12819730938 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0968483904967 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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