Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child(5-10 years old)?
1. Being helpful
2. Being honest
3. Being well organized
Our goals should be to encourage children to be helpful and honest but, one of the most important values we should teach our children is the power of organizing. The reasons to demonstrate my perspective will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, Children may be in strange or unusual situations, fearing the unknown. It’s easy to get lost in the weeds at facing new situations but, being well-organized helps children to have a sense of the big picture, allowing them to make decisions confidently. In other words, children tend to make the most efficient decision when they look at the big picture or see the forest for the trees, and it’s not possible except through learning organizing. For instance, when I was a young child almost eight years old, I always feared things outside my experience such as strangers, new environments, and new situations. therefore, my parents talked to a consultant and he offered some tips to improve my organization skill; like using checklists to post assignments and household chores, trying to establish and sticking to a regular dinnertime and regular bedtime, keeping a large calendar for the household, listing the family's commitments, schedules for extracurricular activities, days off from school and major events at home and school. Which assisted me in having a sense of a big picture and improved my self-confidence in facing things outside my experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 448, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to organize'.
Suggestion: to organize
...’s not possible except through learning organizing. For instance, when I was a young child...
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Line 2, column 625, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
..., new environments, and new situations. therefore, my parents talked to a consultant and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18614718615 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03962696666 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640692640693 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.864931344 48.9658058833 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.75 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 20.6045352989 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.125 5.45110844103 204% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238218388629 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956185143757 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888017915983 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208249070094 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670703518103 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 11.7677419355 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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