Who influence more, family or friends?
First, some radical changes in every part of our life make us select new friends. As people get older, it is more probable that their interests and thoughts would change. These changes would need to find some new friends whose thoughts and interests are the same as yours. For example, when I was at high school, where is located in my hometown, I had some close friends. We spent most of our times on our common hobbies like hanging out with each other, going to cinema, playing football and so on. It was worthwhile to cherish our friendship. Nevertheless, after we had finished high school, some of us found a job and started working and then started their family, whereas some other migrated to another city where was far away, and bout me, I decided to continue my study. I was admitted to the university in another city. These days I am studying my favorite major at my favorite university at the same time having some new friends. As you can see, although we liked to keep on continuing our friendship, the world wants something different.
Second, making new friends help to be more successful in your life. For example, when I was in the university, I had two friends who were completely different from each other. One of them just had two friends all the time he was at the university, but the other one made new friends with everyone easily. Although, they lived at the same place and being the same major, the latter one was always more successful and happier because he had many friends. Whenever he confronted with problems in his project or homework, he just shared the problem with all of his friends; it was interesting that at least one of his friends could help him with his problem. As you can see, if he had not made so many friends, he would not have solved his problem so rapidly.
To sum up, although most of people prefer to keep their old friends I definitely prefer to make new friendship. Not only is it ineluctable to make new friends at some different conditions in our life, it also would help us to be more successful. Everyone should make new friendship if they find someone who is worthwhile and trustful.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...f us found a job and started working and then started their family, whereas some ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...y, and bout me, I decided to continue my study. I was admitted to the universit...
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..., I decided to continue my study. I was admitted to the university in another c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...o continue my study. I was admitted to the university in another city. These da...
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Line 1, column 1025, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'wants'' or 'want's'?
Suggestion: wants'; want's
...on continuing our friendship, the world wants something different. Second, making ne...
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Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...roblem so rapidly. To sum up, although most of people prefer to keep their old friends I defi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, second, so, then, whereas, while, at least, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58854166667 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48654691924 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497395833333 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 3.51792114695 284% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5431099348 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1242612158 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466948133182 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053043497024 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10083973125 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502512036707 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.