Why Governments should provide free internet access to people
Perhaps no subject in the world is as likely to cause so much controversy as how to use a country's budget to provide diffrent assets and services to people. An issue in dispute is that whether goverments should priorotize giving free access to internet or spend its resources for other services such as public transportation or buliding roads. Some people advocate that the other services are more important, while opponents suggest that internet is the apex of our modern civilization and governments shuold pay a special attention to advancing internet technology through society. In my opinion, Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost, for two reasons.
First and foremost, the internet facilitates the flow of information. Needless is to say how essential internet technology is for 21st century, the information era. Internet changed the way we live drasticaly due to its many advantages. For example, the internet provides us with easy, time and energy efficient way of communicating data. In the past, people tended to send written mails to comminucate with people witl long distances away, but today you can have a video call to anyone with internet access throughout the world. Therefore the internet paved the way for transmitting any kind of data you desire. In fact, many professional groups such as scientists, technologists, businessmen, educators and etc convey data by the internet. As a result, nowadays economy of the world is somehow interconnected and globalization is improved. Without the internet, none of these were possible. Consequently, goveerments should pay a special attention for supplying the infrastrucutures that are needed to spread a good quality internet access for all the citizent of their country.
Second, technological trends shows that the internet is going to play more pivotal role in our lives, particularly with invention of AI. Artificial intelligence that is joint with internet in going to make what the experts call intenet of things. With the internet of things all the assets of human's lives such as refrigrators, coolers, house lights, ... and automobiles are going to be connected to internet. As a result people have more control over their surrondings. Imagine a day that you are coming back from work, first of all you have not to drive because your car is now driving autonoumsly due to AI and the GPS provided by internet. In the middle of the way, you want to be informed about what ingredients you need, so you can check your refrigerator through internet. You don't even have to attend stores your self because you can order your need from internet. People can also control the lighting and tempreture of their housing by just adjusting them through thier mobile phones. All this advantages that internet brings us justify the reason why countries should improve internet access for their people.
From what has been discussed above, one can reach a conclusion than due to the facilitating effect that the internet provides on data-sharing, and, also, the more advantagous roles that it is going to play in our lives, governments should provide free internet access to everu one. Finally, I suggest governments should introduce incentives such as lowering taxes for internet companies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 531, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...h internet access throughout the world. Therefore the internet paved the way for transmit...
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Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... are going to be connected to internet. As a result people have more control over ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...your refrigerator through internet. You dont even have to attend stores your self be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2840.0 1977.66487455 144% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91475107978 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 289.0 212.727598566 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529304029304 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 879.3 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1590353789 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.230769231 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.96153846154 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408882915807 0.236089414692 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105234931773 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810387305419 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282290189087 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682956849514 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 86.8835125448 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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