why people attend college and university?
Some people think that attending college or university is important to improve their opportunity to have a better career. Although I understand their point of view, I think that attending college or university is important for people to increase their socialnet work and to gain more knowledge.
From an educational perspective, students attend college to gain more knowledge. Knowledge is such a powerful tool that possessing it can diminish nearly all life problems. For instance, when students attend college they will have the chance to benefit from the professor information.If students attend pharmacy school, they will have the opportunity to interact with a biology professor, an organic chemistry professor. Those professors are more proficient to provide the students with the sufficient amount of knowledge. Students after graduation from pharmacy school will be proficient and they will have enough knowledge to help the society.
Socially, students go to college to interact with different people. University is a place where people from different back ground get the opportunity to interact with each other. For example, when students attend college, the chance of increase their social net work increase. For example, students could interact with other students to work on a project. they can work together to complete an assignment. In the mean time college has different people with different culture, that allows students to learn more about the other cultures. Interacting with other students is beneficial for most student to gain self confident and successful life in the future.
In conclusion for the reason I mentioned above, I think that attending college is not only helpful for having abetter future career, but also to gain more knowledge about the subjects. Going to college is the best way to interact with different people and increase our social network.
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- tpo indepemdent 23 3
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- Young people have no influence on the important decision that determine the future of society as a whole. 60
- TPO integrated 44 73
- TPO-28 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44745762712 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76659600103 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477966101695 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7059679181 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4375 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243575227028 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987827672725 0.076458572812 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100577195354 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192647993644 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100736932762 0.0645574589148 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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