People in society work in many different settings, and for a variety of reasons. What do you think is the main reason why people have jobs?
to feel happier about their lives
to save money for the future
to develop new skills
Use specific examples and details to support your answer.
Normally, all adult people have different occupations. Choosing a job, the most widespread goal to work is earning money, although other factors should also be considered. Between these choices, I suggest that people work because they want to be happier. Working, they can have home, feed their family and entertain themselves
To begin with, unemployment and homelessness are tightly connected concepts. In other words, people, who have lost a job, are more likely to lose home too. Because not everyone can afford to buy a house, especially in big cities, many people rent apartments. When they become unemployed, the toughest question for them is, where to live. Moreover, renting costs or mortgages often eat up most of the budget. As a result, employers, who have well-paid jobs, feel more free and have money for something else. That is, the more you earn, the more comfortable conditions you can afford. Consequently, many people go to work in order to solve a housing issue and feel good.
Next, many people work because they have unemployed family members. Mostly I talk about old parents and young children, although sometimes only one partner works in a couple. Because children are not allowed to work and parents receive a small pension, these people should take care of their relatives. Thus, they have no chance not to work. For instance, in Russia elderly people receive a small amount of money from the government. As a consequence, their children are in charge of them. In order to raise children and provide parents with normal conditions, they should earn enough money. When these goals are reached, most people are satisfied.
Finally, the more you work, the more opportunities you have for leisure. In particular, having well-paid jobs, people can afford the best trips, luxurious activities, expensive restaurants and so on. In other words, the more money you earn, the better you rest. As a consequence, it is some kind of motivation for many employees to reach this status. For instance, I know companies that inspire their workers, showing them movies about luxurious cruises. Surprisingly, it is an efficient strategy. As a result, nspired workers work in order to afford a dream.
In conclusion, it may seem a little bit controversial, but people who have a job are happier than those who do not work. Although sometimes it is hard to work, they do not face a lot of difficulties. Because working people earn money, they have a place to live, their loved ones are well-fed and they have opportunities to entertain.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 30, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, kind of, as a result, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2132.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0401891253 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71716269932 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531914893617 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9485683577 48.9658058833 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.5172413793 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5862068966 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65517241379 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291491103295 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810797725337 0.076458572812 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461945325156 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181567527872 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137147069266 0.0645574589148 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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