Why people should go short distance by bike ?
In recent years, there has been an increasing interest in the cycling. There is a considerable body of opinion which holds that people should ride their bikes for short distances. This paper will examine the reason why I am in favor of this argument.
On one hand, what draws much of my attention is health improvement. It cannot be denied that going short distance by bike is synonymous with doing exercises. By dint of this, people stand a golden chance to activate their body. Thanks to this, it is possible for people to burn a great huge sum of calories. During this process, there is likelihood for humans to avoid many diseases such as obesity, heartattack. Without doubt, this leads to the fact that this probably gives rise to maximizing their fitness. In the same faction, biking for the short distance is closely related to spending time in the open air. By virtue of this, people are prone to socializing. Under those circumstances, humans have the tendency to share their feelings. During this process, people are capable of weighting off their mind, removing bad feelings. Eventually, it makes it possible for humans to relax themselve. By and large, for the most part going short distance by bike greatly contributes to health improvement.
On the other hand, some people express a different point of view that it takes too much time to travel by bike in a short distance. As a consequence, it completely hinders people from feeling happy. Although that might be true, it is just the surface of the issue. People have already scheduled the plan. Everything is under control. This, indeed, proves that time consumption is not really affected. Another point often overlooked is that even if time consumption does exist, it should be considered as the chance for people to be away from work. They have the potential to relax. Humans have the inclination to generate creative ideas. Thanks to this, people are given the opportunity to smoothen their work. Beyond any doubt, it brings about life success for them. This, indeed,enables humans to be feel with happiness. Beyond any doubt, people should put off the idea that travel by bike in short distance leads to stress.
In summary, health improvement and personal happiness are the convincing reasons for my choice. It is my hope that humans take this writing into great consideration to gather diverse perspectives on the issue regarding the benefits of cycling.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, look, regarding, so, then, in addition, in summary, as a result, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2332.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 448.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20535714286 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60065326758 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83619553311 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473214285714 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 4.94265232975 344% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9096184323 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7333333333 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323357273117 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883195699497 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821945305077 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230028234494 0.150856017488 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499602415711 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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