you have been told the dormitory room at the university must be share by two students.
would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate?
I prefer the university assign a student to share a room with me. I always want to meet new people in my life. I learn a lot of new things from them.
If I choose my roommate, I will opt like my other choices. Therefore, I won't have a new experience. Likewise, I don't know anyone at the university.
People are different in many aspects, because of this they can learn from each other. I will exemplify my point with a true story about something that happened to me. When I was a student at computer science, I had a roommate who studied mathematics. He worked on Game Theory, a field between mathematics and economy, During his study, I have learned its concept. I continue to learn it, and I work in that field.
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- TPO-54 - Independent Writing Task 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ays want to meet new people in my life. I learn a lot of new things from them. I...
^
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...wont have a new experience. Likewise, I dont know anyone at the university. People ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 13.8261648746 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 52.1666666667 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 582.0 1977.66487455 29% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 407.700716846 33% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34328358209 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.48103885553 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65537447242 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 212.727598566 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679104477612 0.524837075471 129% => OK
syllable_count: 190.8 618.680645161 31% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.4907694565 48.9658058833 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.9090909091 100.406767564 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1818181818 20.6045352989 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 5.45110844103 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123184102659 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486436864171 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0811601164526 0.0737576698707 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876151714125 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425188348674 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 11.7677419355 43% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 58.1214874552 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 40.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 12.0 Out of 30
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