You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice.
Do you have your own business or you are employee? Think about it and you could realize that you work for someone else. Having an own business would bring some advantages to your life. Personally, I believe that it is better to invest my money in buying a business. This will make me gain profits, these revenues would allow me to buy more things and this could serve as a place for living as well.
First and foremost, investing in purchasing a business could bring more money to your life. Depending of the type of business, this could make increase the money that you already have. Some business could make your profits go up faster than others, but the fact is because of the business you could even become rich. Although that buying a house could make your way to live better, is it not true that you could also stay where you live now and watch how your money goes up? This money could be invested later.
Secondly, it is known that the money earned by the business could produce more profits if it is invested correctly. Thus, this money will make more revenues for you, and you can use this money to buy whatever you want, even a house. In other words, buying a business, by means of the money produced, will allow you to buy more things that you consider necessary; for example, a new house, car, pet and so on. On the other hand, buying house will not allow buy something more later. You could not buy a business because of a house will not make revenues for you.
Last but not least, every business needs a building in order customer can go and contract the services. Therefore, when you buy a business, you are purchasing it with all things that are related to it and allow the business to function. If you do not have some place to live or you live in a small house, which is a reason to move and think to buy a house, one floor of the business’ building could serve you to live. In addition, you could buy some good furniture with the profits and make it up really well. For instance, it is known in my country that there are business which the first and second floors serve as a workplaces, it could be markets, and the last floor is where the owner live. Nevertheless, if you buy a house, even though some room could serve as a workplace, you will not have the other thing which a business need as the logo, merchandising and etcetera.
In a nutshell, although some people would prefer to buy a house, which could serve them for their holidays, I strongly prefer to buy a business, which will allow me to make my money increase, buy a new necessary things and have a some good place to live instead a house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 623, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a workplace' or simply 'workplaces'?
Suggestion: a workplace; workplaces
...ch the first and second floors serve as a workplaces, it could be markets, and the last floo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 29.0 9.8082437276 296% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2152.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40081799591 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29061494645 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.376278118609 0.524837075471 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6213298028 48.9658058833 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8181818182 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2272727273 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339607663808 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140355524786 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773305617297 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232670157616 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383751005256 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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