You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. Which would you choose to buy? Give specific reasons to explain your choice
Given the choice between owning a house and having a business, I would definitely choose a business because of the better self-improvement and financial potential it could bring about.
To begin with, running a business could help improve my leadership and managing skills. As an economy student, I really need an environment to apply and brush up my knowledge and skills taught in university. If I have my own company, I will have place to follow my own strategies, make them more complete and train myself along the way. It is obvious that my leadership and coordinating skills will be drastically developed. There is no doubt that a business could give me a tremendous improvement, which owning a house could never offer.
Second, a business is a good condition to multiple my money because of its profit. House would not only give me no more money but also call for more expenses when it gets older and the households need repairing with the passage of time. In that case, buying a business is obviously a better investment. After making some money from my business, I can buy houses which are many times better than the one I could buy at the beginning. Furthermore, I could assure a better life condition and live a sufficient life until the end of my life with my business.
Admitted that a house might offer an opportunity to develop important skills in building up a happy family, which is an important part of life, I believe that finance is an imperative element of a good life too. It will be so difficult if we do not have enough money to pay for daily basic demand. As a result, the happy life could be threatened and could not last long.
To summarize, with all the aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that Buying a business is the better choice in terms of finance and essential skills improvement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'skills'' or 'skill's'?
Suggestion: skills'; skill's
...hoice in terms of finance and essential skills improvement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, second, so, no doubt, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7125 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79815089613 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6704531613 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166717080625 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583911101654 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547658381446 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101630443375 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493876051533 0.0645574589148 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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