The contribution of young people to the community
The contribution of the youth to the communities has been a controversial topic of today discussion. Some people might think that young people are not helping the society as much as they can. However, I am of the opinion that the youth are doing a pretty good job.
To begin with, there are more and more volunteer programs by young people all over the world. They are trying their best to devote their time and power for the development of the society, which should be recognized as a huge contribution. For example, my university volunteer club has done a lot of works to develop our student community and help people in remote mountainous areas in our country every year. I believe that it has a huge impact on bettering the society.
Second, the youth could have many other ways rather than doing physical works to help their community. To be more specific, young people could spend their time to study and perfect themselves and join their hands in improving the society when they get their expertise. With the knowledge and experiences they have equiped themselves, I contend that they could contribute more significantly to the development of their community. Take my teacher as an evident example. He spent his youth on persuing his doctoral degree. After that, he has come back to our university and tried his best to make immense positive changes in teaching quality of our university.
Admittedly, there are now many young people who only spend their time on playing without thinking about the society. However, they are just a small fraction, I strongly disagree with the intention of taking them to talk about the youth as a whole.
With those aforementioned points, I contend that the young are doing their good work in contributing their power to the development of the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88888888889 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67869420108 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3856410126 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251688405573 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786444223467 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893368772634 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16494795363 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090732420021 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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